Snake Eyes (Louis Tomlinson Fan Fic) - Comments, page 3

@LTStyles92
Well, it shows, truly, and to me it is far more important than other overrated stuff as being original (as if it were possible after Shakespeare.) I'm so glad I find your story. I laughed so hard on Louis fearing Jay's swat. God, that was pure genius! Don't want to sound patronising but keep up the good work! ;) Oh, and you like Shakespeare so you are my friend :)

@not_any_maryjane
Thanks! I really appreciate your comment. I do really care about the story and the characters. When I took it on, I decided I would write it for me and hopefully some people might enjoy it. Sometimes, I take longer to post like the current chapter. I sat on it for a week thinking about it and then added a few things before I post it.

I see in your bio you're a Shakespeare fan too. :)

I'd love to hear some of those stories! They sound great already!!! So, please, share them with us!

You know, you are on chapter 24 into a story mostly written in present, and you manage perfectly the tension and the times. You got me holding my breath every single second. That's amazing writing. You respect and care about your story and that fact says a lot about you. Can't wait to see what happens next!

@not_any_maryjane
Aw thank you! Next chapter will be up tonight. It's done, I just need to proofread it.

Oh, that first kiss! This is going directly to that fanfiction awards! I can't wait to see what happens next so I come back in a minute!

@exhaletruth
Thanks for your comment. Yes, next chapter she will be going home. And yes, you interpreted the problem correctly.

I hope when Louis sees her he treats her the same even tho she looks better. They really need to get to know each other cuz i think thats whats causing her insecurities. Anyways im soooo glad u updated even tho its just a filler i love it anyways :P cant wait until the next chapter hopefully shes going back home ;)

@LeeAnnPayne
Lol I hope you didn't combust but I'm glad you love it!!! Next chapter should be up by the end of the weekend.

Oh my gosh. I think I just combusted sitting in my seat. Read the past three chapters in one sitting and holy freaking crap. Can I please just be Loren?? Lol. Loving the story keep up the good work. Lots of good details.

@raadicalll

I'm posting chapter 21 right now :)

please update:)

@Louistomlinson

What's a good love story without some drama lol? I'm glad you like the story. Next chapter will be up by the end of the week.

Finally they admitted it!!!!! But I foresee lots of drama in the near future...
This story is amazing!

@LeeAnnPayne

That makes me feel good because I was sooooo questioning the second half of the chapter. I appreciate you taking the time to comment. Hopefully, I give you something good next chapter worth reading more than once :)

OMG! I love it!! IT was so sweet. I would re-read this chapter like 7 billion times! Beautiful!

@bonnie_st.cloud
Aw. Thank you so much! Gonna try to find some time to start working on it today.

Can't wait for the next chapter you're such a great writer

Can't wait for the next chapter you're such a great writer

Ok sounds good thanks. Btw your a great writer keep it up and i know how you feel same here its hard to keep updating when busy. No rush :)

@Aj iobe
Thank you! I've had a crazy week so it will probably not be until next weekend before I can finish the next chapter.