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Reviews & DUMB Fan-Fic Moments - Comments, page 12

Can you review my story The Outsiders, and A Day in The Life of a Diva. I have to admit, the first few chapters of A Day in the Life of a Diva are pretty slow, and the grammer is decent, but it gets batter as the story progresses. The Outsiders has 2 chapters, and A Day in the Life of a Diva has 30.

@TheRockerOfTheParty
Thanks! :)

@TheRockerOfTheParty
Thanks! :)

@Louis is awesomeness
I will try to both

Hey, can you review my story I survived with 1D? It's actually 22-25 chapters long. If that's to long you can read my other story Midnight Memories. I would appreciate it! Thanks!=D

chapter 104 made me spit my cup of tea out all over my laptop. I'm actually in tears it's that funny. You're reactions are brilliant x

Hey there, my name is Sarah.

I know you get a lot of these requests, but I would like to ask you if you would please review my story. It's called With Flecks of Gold, and I would really appreciate it if you could please take the time to read it over and simply leave a comment or something.

I admire how honest and serious you are about reviews, and you seem to be a talented writer, so, again, I would appreciate if you would at least take a look and tell me what you think.

Thank you, lovely! :)

sarahd98 sarahd98
1/2/14

LMAOO. You're so funny.

sanita.s sanita.s
1/2/14

Sorry for saying that three times. The page crashed so I clicked it loads and then it worked -__-

Will you review my story? Its new That Feeling. And I know there is grammar issued but it is because I update from my tablet. If you reviewed it it would mean the world to me.

Will you review my story? Its new That Feeling. And I know there is grammar issued but it is because I update from my tablet. If you reviewed it it would mean the world to me.

Will you review my story? Its new That Feeling. And I know there is grammar issued but it is because I update from my tablet. If you reviewed it it would mean the world to me.

I think these are really funny! although your giving the authors help, you make it a laugh so that they will take it lightly. They are really good! I hope your mam gets better soon!

How is your mom?

W31RDLY R4ND0M W31RDLY R4ND0M
12/31/13

That reminds me of what my friend said. She was like I'd let One Direction rape me any day. Then she was like but it probably wouldn't count for rape if I liked it..

Oh, and my best wishes for your mom.

Wey Hey Wey Hey
12/30/13

I really hope that your mum is getting better. Prayers for you. x

Haha, UFO... Haha

Haha, UFO... Haha

How's your mum?

Niall's_Princess Niall's_Princess
12/30/13

I hope your mom gets better! X

Ijustlovefood Ijustlovefood
12/30/13