Reviews & DUMB Fan-Fic Moments - Comments, page 11

can you review my stories? Chased Across the World and Lost and Found. Thanks so much!!!

Can you review The Bad Boy Affect?

@TheRockerOfTheParty
Thank you you are amazing

@Harrysgirl4life2379
Sure, as soon as I finish some more reviews

Wow a 9/10 Thank you very much !

@TheRockerOfTheParty
Can I ask another favor, will you review my story story of my life?

@Harrysgirl4life2379
Anytime!

Thank you love!! You don't know how good it feels when someone likes your story

Helllooooo.

Can you review Broken?

:D

Hi I haven't finished both if mine but I have two
1) It all started when we bumped into each other
2) I'm Birdie

Thankyou for considering this!

Hey i just started Million Pound girlfriend! Maybe you could review tyank yoh:)

Hey, can you review my story 'The.Unknown Fall'? Thanks!

@fascinated
Fixed it for you!

@Harrysgirl4life2379
I will be starting your review now!

This is more of a favor, but when writing P. S' can you please go P. P. S instead of P. S. S??? Because P. S stands for Post Script, and I think it's supposed to be post post script etc, in stead of post script script. And I know that that's probably super confusing and doesn't make any sense. Sorry about that.

Oh btw I'm sorry to hear about your mom, Unique. Hopefully she will get better so you don't have to live with your dad. The doctors will try their best. Stay strong! :)

I was wondering if you could review my story when you have time. It's called Sweet Disaster. It only has one chapter but I want to know if I'm on the right path and if I should keep going on with the story. I would really appreciate it, thank you. :)

@TheRockerOfTheParty
Okay I didn't know about her mum, I'm sorry I don't mean to be rude or anything and thank you

@Harrysgirl4life2379
Unique is having problems with her mother right now.. I am doing the reviews currently. I will start yours as soon as I finish my waiting list I collected. Your #3 on the list now.

Um hi, I commented a little while ago and asked you to review my story the shadows behind us, I don't want to be a bother but I just haven't seen it yet, I know you must be very busy

oh my god tho like when 1d live together and hang out everyday it kills me. and when girls meet them at like a meet and greet and then 1/5 like stares at them and whispers to another 1/5 and somehow already has feelings for her and ugh i get so pissed when people write about sophisticated adult topics like careers and don't know anything and how jobs work and say stuff like oh yeah i make 200 bucks an hour or they talk about alcohol and the only liquor they know of is beer and they try to make it sound all fancy but god damnit it's just beer and i hate when repetition is really bad and they use phrases continuously like in after the harry styles fanfiction how many damn times is tessa gonna say "i'm surprised by the harsh words coming out of my mouth but-" okay thats all my rant for now