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Traces of Your Touch (An AU Fanfiction) - Comments, page 28

@Rihanna
Aww :'), please don't thank me for honesty! I'm just happy to have found such a story! You's deserved the truth, and that's what I believed! Thanks for the shout out, by the way, that was over the moon nice of you's. It means a lot! Another amazing chapter, and am excited to read on! Again, you's deserve every reader, vote and comment :)
Best of luck ladies, though I know it's only going to get better<3
@Canadianeeh

THANK YOU! THANK YOU!! THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!! YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH WE LOVE YOU FOR YOUR KIND WORDS!!!!!!!! :'D WE WERE WEEPING THE ENTIRE TIME WE READ YOUR COMMENT!!! :'D YOU ARE ABSOLUTELY THE BESTEST EVEERRRRR!!! TO BE VERY HONEST, WE REALLY DON'T DESERVE SUCH AN AMAZING RESPONSE AND DIDN'T EVEN EXPECT SO MUCH LOVE WHEN WE FIRST STARTED OFF!!! CAUSE THERE ARE SO MANY AMAZING WRITERS OUT THERE!!!! AND YET, YOU'VE TAKEN THE TIME TO READ MY STORY AND LEAVE BACK SUCH AN AMAZING RESPONSE!!! WE CAN'T THANK YOU ENOUGH!!! :'D

THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOO FREAKING MUCH FOR SUCH A LOVELY COMMENT!!! WE REALLY LOVE YOU AND HOPE TO READ YOUR STORY SOON!!!!!!!!!!!! x :D -N.K
UPDATE!!!!!!! PLEEEAASSSSEE continue it. :)
Woo Hoo! i'm so excited! :)
Harry'sGyrl2015 Harry'sGyrl2015
10/23/13
Chap:11. Who needs tv or movies with fanfics like these?! Granted it's been plenty of years (not going to reveal how many) since I've graduated high school, but this story just takesm back there. To the first crushes that literally felt like the end of the world and the little encounters that made your heart sink and took like 5 pages in your diary entry.

One me thing I can sure appreciate from this character is although she is pretty, she isn't confident in communicating with guys, like I can remember the stupid random comments I would say around a crush that made me just want to bang my head against a glass window lol. And I like that connection with Aria.

The part when Louis reveals he is the texter, I literally went "aahhhhh man!" I'm feeling every thing right there with her. Okay on to the next chapter ;)
@Rihanna: Uhhhhh!!! It is impossible to argue with you!!!
Fine..... I will accept that I am a good writer only if you accept the fact that you are as good as me, in fact better that me..... :)
NO more arguments!!! :p

Aaannndddd I am supporting this story because it is absolutely amazing....
I can bet that no one can deny the fact that this story is brilliant....!!!
I really need some tips from you guys....
UPDATE!!!!!! ( or as soon as you can meaning whenever you feel your satisfied with the writing ) Great writing and chapter I'd loove to read more, hope you continue it. The comment ; I Hope Louis gets Aria's attention because he is sweet and actually trying unlike someone. But Eleanor shows up and Aria helps Louis. Then an event happens that made Harry APPEAR to be the bad guy, Arai gets sad, upset and some other emotion......and then comes home eating ice cream ( preferably chocolate [rocky road or with the vanila swirls ] , strawberry or Mango. I don't want a happy ending jjuuuuusssssttt yet . Amazing writing , the characters, the plot and how it works, different but the same (in a good way , not to offend or sound like an a**hole ) it really is awesome keep writing it. :D
I honestly love how nice your notes are! And the writing just gets better. I haven't actually enjoyed a fan fiction that's well written, proper grammar, with an amazing story line in an extremely long time.
All I can say, is you's deserve the ratings, votes, and comments. I'm extremely impressed by this, so much so, I just read all of the chapters even though I should be sleeping! I didn't want the chapters to stop!
I'm excited and looking forward to the future updates :)
FYI; you're doing great on your own. The story line flow is seriously, I can't put words into it! It's great, truly. Just keep going with what you've got, because it works! <3
@Amber Night

Are you seriously kidding me? If you're not good than I am a monkey with a human brain!! Like I've said before, your story is one of the first that I have read here and since have been craving for stories as good as yours!!! :D And you're way too sweet and humble to tell me that I'm worse than a mediocre writer!! :P So, there's no point arguing about it!;)

I love you for being soooooooooooo supportive of this story!! :) Thank you!! Thank you! Thank you soooooooooooooooo much for being this wonderful!! :) <3 x


@Liamismyluv

ASDFGHJKLQWERTYUIO! Wow! That is soooooo sweet of you to say that!! :D I can't believe I was able to impress someone even though hundreds of other better writers couldn't!!! :D Thank you sooooooooooooo freaking much!!!! I love you!!!!!!!!! And yes, I personally love Louis and Aria's easy friendship!!! :D However, things will change soon as you can assume from the prologue! Something, hopefully, that none of you will expect!!:D So please keep your faith on this story and we honestly hope we don't disappoint such an amazing reader like yourself!! :)
@Rihanna : I am not as good as you are potraying me and in no way you are a Mediocre writer...

It is great that you have tried to change those stereotypical ideas of high school because that is what makes me want to keep in reading this story more and more... Great job..... :)
@AreWeDifferentOrTheSame

Hiiiiiiiiiiii sweety!!! :D Nope. I'm not planning to write in POVs! Only because I feel that it ruins the mystery of the story!! :( For instance, when people write about Harry's POV, they end up describing all of Harry's feelings which to be very honest makes Harry look a bit girly to me! :/ Not that I'm trying to say that anyone who writes about it is bad or anything. But it doesn't hold much appeal to me, personally. :(

On a brighter note, you are an absolute sweetheart!!! Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!! I love you more than you love this story!! :D I love and look forward to all your comments and output!!! :D As for Aria falling in love, don't worry!! She is infatuated with Harry to the point where she thinks she is in love with him! But when the time comes, she'll know exactly how love feels!! ;) So please keep supporting us like this? I wanna hear more from you!! :D x <3
@Louis'sGyrl2013

No!!! First I read your fics and leave you an amazing feed back and then, and only then, we'll start writing a story together!! :D
@Amber Night

THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE A WRITER AS AMAZING AS YOURSELF IS APPRECIATING A MEDIOCRE WRITER LIKE ME!!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! YOU'RE THE BEST!!!!! I SWEAR!!! :D <3 X

To be very honest, I first started off thinking that I would write a typical fanfic and see if people liked my writing. But as I went on, I tried changing a few stereotypical ideas when it comes to high school drama! I can't really say that I have done well but I'm glad I could atleast capture the interest of great writers like yourself!! :D Thank you so much for being so wonderful, love!!! :D <3 x -N.K
@Niallsgirl

Oh my god!! Thank yoouuuuuuuuuuuuuu!! :D I'm really not but it feels so good to hear that!! :D I love you! Really! :D I hope you like the coming chapters!! :D <3
@ChloewuvsHarry

I can't wait either!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D <3
@Ciao Niccie

SAY WHAT? A SICILIAN HUSBAND?!!!!! ASDFGHJKWERTYUIXCVBNM! I HEAR SICILIAN MEN ARE SUPER HOT (with all due respect to yours)!!!!! Do you hear that? That's my heart burning up in envy!!! So you're not just a pretty face with an outstanding skill of writing stories, but you also have an Italian husband??? GOD! SOME PEOPLE GET EVERYTHING!! :( So unfair!!:'( Spare us with a bit of your amazing list of personalities, skills and choices, bella mia! :(

And do you have any idea how much your and my thoughts are alike? I had only finished writing this chapter when I read about the text from Harry in the second chapter! And I was like holy shit!! I just wrote a similar scene! ASDFGHJKLWERTYUIOP! We are so meant to be together!!! <3 O.O CiaoRiRi Forever!!! :D -N.K
@Meowimafishy

And you're going to get one as soon as I'm done with others!! :D For every single chapter!! :D I'm getting excited just thinking about it!!!! Eeeeeeeeeeeeeee!! x <3
I hate most stories on here but LOOOOVE THIS ONE! I want Louis to get Aria though !
Liamismyluv Liamismyluv
10/23/13
UPDATE!!!!!! I love this story and the chapter, it's really great. Nooooooooo Aria don't fall to easily, I like the characters the characters by the way, keep writing it this is awesome writing. And .Are you going to have/more point of views for the characters?