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First of all I want to thank you for the shout out....:)
Secondly,you are a very generous person, I have to admit it... You know he fact that you are waaaay better than me and yet you are trying to deny it... But I can't.. I know who is better and it's you under any circumstance... And if you want a proof I can give you many because all your readers are with me.... You know I am always right... :p
Thirdly, no matter how mug I want to strangle my English techer, I can't.. She already hates me and if I say something to her, she will make my life a living hell.. So yeah... All I can do is to listen all her remarks and submit my project to another teacher...
Lastly, I want to thank you... Seriously... Thaaannnkkksss a lot for writing such a amazing story.. I made my friends read this story and thay were totally shocked... Never in their life had they even imagined that a fanfiction could be this amazing... Later they were accusing me of fooling them... They thought that you are a professional writer and I was making a fool of them.. So yeah, thanks once again.. I guess i should stop now because if I want to praise your story than I would probably end up in writing a novel about how amazing your story is... I definately look forward for working with you guys... :)
I guess I covered pretty much everything and if I did leave something then I will write about it in the next comment... :)
Secondly,you are a very generous person, I have to admit it... You know he fact that you are waaaay better than me and yet you are trying to deny it... But I can't.. I know who is better and it's you under any circumstance... And if you want a proof I can give you many because all your readers are with me.... You know I am always right... :p
Thirdly, no matter how mug I want to strangle my English techer, I can't.. She already hates me and if I say something to her, she will make my life a living hell.. So yeah... All I can do is to listen all her remarks and submit my project to another teacher...
Lastly, I want to thank you... Seriously... Thaaannnkkksss a lot for writing such a amazing story.. I made my friends read this story and thay were totally shocked... Never in their life had they even imagined that a fanfiction could be this amazing... Later they were accusing me of fooling them... They thought that you are a professional writer and I was making a fool of them.. So yeah, thanks once again.. I guess i should stop now because if I want to praise your story than I would probably end up in writing a novel about how amazing your story is... I definately look forward for working with you guys... :)
I guess I covered pretty much everything and if I did leave something then I will write about it in the next comment... :)
Such a good story oh my goddd! Everytime I see that you guys updated I always look at yours before any of the other stories in my Alerts!!
Bahahah, you are such a darling! My first thought was " Why am I the 'Harry' of the relationship?" But then I saw the compliment. *evil grin* So my answer is . . . YES!
I haven't heard of that story, I'll have to look it up. Curiosity won't let me rest you know. . . well I'm off to Jude's world now too. Muah! TTYL, love. xo
I haven't heard of that story, I'll have to look it up. Curiosity won't let me rest you know. . . well I'm off to Jude's world now too. Muah! TTYL, love. xo
@Louis'sGyrl2013
Hi lovely!! :D How are you? I'm really looking forward to our story together!!! Gaahhhhh!!! This story is taking forever!! :(
Hi lovely!! :D How are you? I'm really looking forward to our story together!!! Gaahhhhh!!! This story is taking forever!! :(
@Ciao Niccie
I just wanna start off by saying, MARRY ME? PLEASE? Leave your hot Sicilian hubby for me!!! I am so overwhelmed right now after reading your comment!! :') I'm completely speechless. I don't know where to start thanking you from!! But all I wanna say is that YOU ARE THE BIGGEST SWEETHEART IN THE ENTIRE SOLAR SYSTEM!! I always look forward to your feedback and once I read them, I melt into goo!! In other words, I'm your Aria and you're my Harry! :D Haha.
Thank you so very much, sweet pea!! I love how you comprehend every single one of my chapters and how you go into depth to understand each and every indirect message hidden in the story!! :D I swear, if it was in my hands and if you were in my country, I'd kidnap you and make you sit for an interview with a famous publishing house!! Maybe I can convince your husband to do it for me!! Yes!! *cue evil smirk*
You have no idea how similar we are!! :D My first crush was also on Liam!! I first looked up 1D because of Zayn and how famous he was amongst my friends. But, Liam took my heart with his hair flip! *drools* I also thought liking Harry would be too cliche as it was obvious that he had more girls after him! However, it soon changed when I read "I'm not your average girl, Harry Styles"! :D And have been a Harry girl ever since!!! :D
Anywho, I'll thank you even more later cause I'm off to reading "Hey Jude"!! :D I'm not getting much time to read it so I don't wanna lose this opportunity!! I love you, sugar!! Thank you once again!!:D <3 x -N.K
P.S- Think about my proposal! We'd be good together! ;) :P
I just wanna start off by saying, MARRY ME? PLEASE? Leave your hot Sicilian hubby for me!!! I am so overwhelmed right now after reading your comment!! :') I'm completely speechless. I don't know where to start thanking you from!! But all I wanna say is that YOU ARE THE BIGGEST SWEETHEART IN THE ENTIRE SOLAR SYSTEM!! I always look forward to your feedback and once I read them, I melt into goo!! In other words, I'm your Aria and you're my Harry! :D Haha.
Thank you so very much, sweet pea!! I love how you comprehend every single one of my chapters and how you go into depth to understand each and every indirect message hidden in the story!! :D I swear, if it was in my hands and if you were in my country, I'd kidnap you and make you sit for an interview with a famous publishing house!! Maybe I can convince your husband to do it for me!! Yes!! *cue evil smirk*
You have no idea how similar we are!! :D My first crush was also on Liam!! I first looked up 1D because of Zayn and how famous he was amongst my friends. But, Liam took my heart with his hair flip! *drools* I also thought liking Harry would be too cliche as it was obvious that he had more girls after him! However, it soon changed when I read "I'm not your average girl, Harry Styles"! :D And have been a Harry girl ever since!!! :D
Anywho, I'll thank you even more later cause I'm off to reading "Hey Jude"!! :D I'm not getting much time to read it so I don't wanna lose this opportunity!! I love you, sugar!! Thank you once again!!:D <3 x -N.K
P.S- Think about my proposal! We'd be good together! ;) :P
@Amber Night
Heelllllllloooooooooo beautiful!! Can I just start off by saying that your teacher has issues (with all due respect)? She's probably too jealous of how good you are OR she probably didn't get some the night before!! Either way she's retarded if she thinks you can't write a piece!! It's her word against hundreds of your readers'!! So enlighten me how exactly you're not a good writer or how I am better than you? Exactly! You can't! Cause you're freaking perfect!!!! :D
That being said, I wanna tell you how honored I feel to hear that you stay up at night just to read my story! :') The author whose story I stayed up at night to read is now doing the same with my story? asdfghjkwertyuiopdfvgbhncvbnm!! I'm over the freaking moon!!!! :D Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you so freaking much, Amber!!!! :D I love youuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! x <3 :D
By the way, I myself am a Zarry girl!! :D And as much as I love Louis, I haven't ever thought of writing about Louis. In most fanfics, Louis is portrayed as Harry's best friend and his character isn't portrayed further than that. So, I'm trying to bring Louis into the limelight for a change in my story!! :D So, that people can appreciate how amazing and underestimated he is!! :D And I think, I'm succeeding from the comments I'm getting about him!!! YAY! Thank you so much for the amazing feedback!! And although I have already read most of the chapters of your story, I'm gonna leave you a feedback you'll absolutely love in a few hours!! :D Khikz!! After all, your story was the reason I got hooked up with this site!! :) Love you, hon!! <3 x -N.K
Heelllllllloooooooooo beautiful!! Can I just start off by saying that your teacher has issues (with all due respect)? She's probably too jealous of how good you are OR she probably didn't get some the night before!! Either way she's retarded if she thinks you can't write a piece!! It's her word against hundreds of your readers'!! So enlighten me how exactly you're not a good writer or how I am better than you? Exactly! You can't! Cause you're freaking perfect!!!! :D
That being said, I wanna tell you how honored I feel to hear that you stay up at night just to read my story! :') The author whose story I stayed up at night to read is now doing the same with my story? asdfghjkwertyuiopdfvgbhncvbnm!! I'm over the freaking moon!!!! :D Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you so freaking much, Amber!!!! :D I love youuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! x <3 :D
By the way, I myself am a Zarry girl!! :D And as much as I love Louis, I haven't ever thought of writing about Louis. In most fanfics, Louis is portrayed as Harry's best friend and his character isn't portrayed further than that. So, I'm trying to bring Louis into the limelight for a change in my story!! :D So, that people can appreciate how amazing and underestimated he is!! :D And I think, I'm succeeding from the comments I'm getting about him!!! YAY! Thank you so much for the amazing feedback!! And although I have already read most of the chapters of your story, I'm gonna leave you a feedback you'll absolutely love in a few hours!! :D Khikz!! After all, your story was the reason I got hooked up with this site!! :) Love you, hon!! <3 x -N.K
@ChloewuvsHarry
Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii, cupcake!! We missed you and all your wonderful comments!! :D Thank you sooooooooooooo much for your kind words!!! But we aren't anywhere near as amazing as you!! :D <3
Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii, cupcake!! We missed you and all your wonderful comments!! :D Thank you sooooooooooooo much for your kind words!!! But we aren't anywhere near as amazing as you!! :D <3
Ahem, *clears throat*
I have to congratulate you on changing my mind on Louis' sex appeal. I actually have a funny confession to go along with this . . . My first "crush" was on Liam, because of the whole puppy eyed/daddy figure. I thought, "Harry is too pretty, I'm sure he has enough fangirls already." And I usually tend to go for the less obvious guy (except my hubby lol). But then I read Stupid Freakin DARK, and I'm like "Helllllllllloo Harry!" And have been a Harry girl ever since.
So what I'm getting at is, I'M DIGGIN LOUIS! I love his sassy and witty sense of humor. He'd be the perfect flirt to make you laugh the whole night. So its funny that a fanfic can change my mind on how I view the boys . . .moving on.
Harry or Louis? Hmmm? I feel like Louis is the easy and 'in your face choice'. Like that instant gratification to a craving. But Harry . . . He obviously makes her so weak its like she turns dumb, from the nerves of course. But he's that craving that any girl would be willing to wait for. My eyes are drooling, you'll have to excuse me. Haha.
Good feedback: I'm normally impatient when I don't see a story taking flight, especially after the 5 chapter or so . . . and I read how you apologize for "not being a good chapter" but thats so far from the truth. And I'm sure everyone here agrees as they, we all, are hanging by the thinnest thread for your next chapters. So you are doing damn good job!
But the same holds true for stories that are reaching the galaxy without the reader feeling ready to take off. Too fast too soon. You've achieved a build up that is subtle yet intriguing, the details are what speak volumes and allow such a powerful connection.
Speaking of connection, another reason why we adore you, you write such lovely notes that blur the line of author and reader to a more personal relationship. Heck, its even inspired me to write more in that section. In fact, I look forward to it as much as I do the story. Feeding into that community, book club mentality I have of this website, so by all means LET THE NOTES CARRY ON!
Love you to bits :) But I will start singing the Little Mermaid's Kiss the Girl, next time if I don't get some action soon . . . just kidding . . .no not really :)
I have to congratulate you on changing my mind on Louis' sex appeal. I actually have a funny confession to go along with this . . . My first "crush" was on Liam, because of the whole puppy eyed/daddy figure. I thought, "Harry is too pretty, I'm sure he has enough fangirls already." And I usually tend to go for the less obvious guy (except my hubby lol). But then I read Stupid Freakin DARK, and I'm like "Helllllllllloo Harry!" And have been a Harry girl ever since.
So what I'm getting at is, I'M DIGGIN LOUIS! I love his sassy and witty sense of humor. He'd be the perfect flirt to make you laugh the whole night. So its funny that a fanfic can change my mind on how I view the boys . . .moving on.
Harry or Louis? Hmmm? I feel like Louis is the easy and 'in your face choice'. Like that instant gratification to a craving. But Harry . . . He obviously makes her so weak its like she turns dumb, from the nerves of course. But he's that craving that any girl would be willing to wait for. My eyes are drooling, you'll have to excuse me. Haha.
Good feedback: I'm normally impatient when I don't see a story taking flight, especially after the 5 chapter or so . . . and I read how you apologize for "not being a good chapter" but thats so far from the truth. And I'm sure everyone here agrees as they, we all, are hanging by the thinnest thread for your next chapters. So you are doing damn good job!
But the same holds true for stories that are reaching the galaxy without the reader feeling ready to take off. Too fast too soon. You've achieved a build up that is subtle yet intriguing, the details are what speak volumes and allow such a powerful connection.
Speaking of connection, another reason why we adore you, you write such lovely notes that blur the line of author and reader to a more personal relationship. Heck, its even inspired me to write more in that section. In fact, I look forward to it as much as I do the story. Feeding into that community, book club mentality I have of this website, so by all means LET THE NOTES CARRY ON!
Love you to bits :) But I will start singing the Little Mermaid's Kiss the Girl, next time if I don't get some action soon . . . just kidding . . .no not really :)
As for the argument of me being a better writer than you....
I was supposed to submit a story as a project.. I spent 3 bloody days to write it... When the teacher checked it, she came to my table, slammed my project and asked I have no idea about to write a story. I cant even write a single sentence properly, forget about writing an entire story.. And I was like crap!! Am I really such a horrible writer??
So yeah, there you go... There is no way that I will be a better writer than you.. No argument necessary.. :)
I was supposed to submit a story as a project.. I spent 3 bloody days to write it... When the teacher checked it, she came to my table, slammed my project and asked I have no idea about to write a story. I cant even write a single sentence properly, forget about writing an entire story.. And I was like crap!! Am I really such a horrible writer??
So yeah, there you go... There is no way that I will be a better writer than you.. No argument necessary.. :)
@Rihanna: I guess it is really impossible to argue with you but whom are to trying to kid with by saying that my story is better than yours??? That cannot happen even in a million years... And I still think that you guys are waaaaayyy better than me...
Anyways, talking about your story... I really want to thank you... This is one of the best piece of literature that I have come across so far... Everything is just absolutely perfect whether it is the grammar or the spellings and I become a dumb person while describing how amazing your story line is because I cannot find any words to describe it... It is just perfect... No.... It is beyond perfect...
I mean your story has got me sooo hooked up that I always read it and ignore to write mine... Can you believe it is five in the morning in London and I am reading this story and posting my comments instead of sleeping.. So you can understand how much I love our story... :)
As for your notes section, please don't change it... Your notes are one if the reason why I actually feel connected to the story.. The way you address your readers is absolutely amazing... So just keep it up... :D
Last but not the least, I absolutely love how you have portrayed Louis in this story... Sometimes it makes me want to be Louis's girl rather than Harry's.. I find myself as confused as Aria, trying to pick between Harry and Louis...
Anyways, talking about your story... I really want to thank you... This is one of the best piece of literature that I have come across so far... Everything is just absolutely perfect whether it is the grammar or the spellings and I become a dumb person while describing how amazing your story line is because I cannot find any words to describe it... It is just perfect... No.... It is beyond perfect...
I mean your story has got me sooo hooked up that I always read it and ignore to write mine... Can you believe it is five in the morning in London and I am reading this story and posting my comments instead of sleeping.. So you can understand how much I love our story... :)
As for your notes section, please don't change it... Your notes are one if the reason why I actually feel connected to the story.. The way you address your readers is absolutely amazing... So just keep it up... :D
Last but not the least, I absolutely love how you have portrayed Louis in this story... Sometimes it makes me want to be Louis's girl rather than Harry's.. I find myself as confused as Aria, trying to pick between Harry and Louis...
Love love loved the chapter!;)
I think it's good that your slowing it down a bit, and don't find it boring in the least!:)
Cant wait for the next chapter, you guys are truly amazing!:)
I think it's good that your slowing it down a bit, and don't find it boring in the least!:)
Cant wait for the next chapter, you guys are truly amazing!:)
@Canadianeeh
After that beautiful feed back, I'd be stupid not to give you a shout out!!! It was completely my pleasure!!! :D And sweety, if you don't stop being so freaking sweet I'm gonna end up falling for you instead of Harry!! :D Thank you sooooooooooooo much for being so wonderful towards us!!! We are nowhere as close to being as good as you portray us to be!!! :D But it honestly feels good having to hear it even though we don't deserve it!! :'D Thank you so very much, love!! We hope we don't disappoint you in the coming future!!! :) <3 x -N.K
After that beautiful feed back, I'd be stupid not to give you a shout out!!! It was completely my pleasure!!! :D And sweety, if you don't stop being so freaking sweet I'm gonna end up falling for you instead of Harry!! :D Thank you sooooooooooooo much for being so wonderful towards us!!! We are nowhere as close to being as good as you portray us to be!!! :D But it honestly feels good having to hear it even though we don't deserve it!! :'D Thank you so very much, love!! We hope we don't disappoint you in the coming future!!! :) <3 x -N.K
@Ciao Niccie
CAN YOU NOT? I MEAN SERIOUSLY I'VE ALREADY FALLEN FOR YOU BY READING YOUR STORY AND NOW YOU'RE MAKING ME FALL FOR YOU EVEN MORE BY LEAVING REVIEWS AS AMAZING AS THIS? JUST STOP!! OK?
AND ALSO STOP BEING SUCH A FREAKING GENIUS WITH YOUR WRITING!!! DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA THAT I'M ALREADY ON THE 6TH CHAPTER? IN ONE GO!!! I DIDN'T EVEN WANNA STOP TO PUT IN A REVIEW!!! IT'S THAT GOOD!!!! AND YOU'RE UPDATING MORE AND MORE CHAPTERS!!! ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME HERE?? GAH!!!
CAN YOU NOT? I MEAN SERIOUSLY I'VE ALREADY FALLEN FOR YOU BY READING YOUR STORY AND NOW YOU'RE MAKING ME FALL FOR YOU EVEN MORE BY LEAVING REVIEWS AS AMAZING AS THIS? JUST STOP!! OK?
AND ALSO STOP BEING SUCH A FREAKING GENIUS WITH YOUR WRITING!!! DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA THAT I'M ALREADY ON THE 6TH CHAPTER? IN ONE GO!!! I DIDN'T EVEN WANNA STOP TO PUT IN A REVIEW!!! IT'S THAT GOOD!!!! AND YOU'RE UPDATING MORE AND MORE CHAPTERS!!! ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME HERE?? GAH!!!
@Amber Night
Whooaaaaa!!! No way, Jose!! In no way am I saying that I'm in any way better than you!! Cause I'm not!! You don't need to admit how good you are cause we'll do it for you!!! :D Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!! Amber Night is one of the best writers on here!!! There!!! :D So now you have no more reasons to argue with me!!! :D Khikz! Also, I'm the one in need of tips from you, woman!! Not the other way round! And my story will never be as amazing your story!! :D We still can't believe that the author's story with which we first began has complimented us and has been this supportive!! It's like a dream come true!! asdfghjklwertyui! We love you!! *.* <3 So freaking much!! x -N.K
Whooaaaaa!!! No way, Jose!! In no way am I saying that I'm in any way better than you!! Cause I'm not!! You don't need to admit how good you are cause we'll do it for you!!! :D Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!! Amber Night is one of the best writers on here!!! There!!! :D So now you have no more reasons to argue with me!!! :D Khikz! Also, I'm the one in need of tips from you, woman!! Not the other way round! And my story will never be as amazing your story!! :D We still can't believe that the author's story with which we first began has complimented us and has been this supportive!! It's like a dream come true!! asdfghjklwertyui! We love you!! *.* <3 So freaking much!! x -N.K
@AreWeDifferentOrTheSame
Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, lovely!! No way are you an a**hole for telling me the truth!!! We actually love you for being honest about it!!! :D We were starting to think that it was becoming typical so we've decided to take a different turn!!! :D Thank you so so sssssssssooooooooooooooooooooooooo much for your feedback!!
We just wanted to inform you that we're not planning to introduce Eleanor or any of the boys' girlfriends in this story!! As much as we respect them and love them, I guess it becomes extremely typical if we make the boys end up with their real girlfriends or even the OC's best friends!! And we want to keep it as a one direction fanfic!! :)
As for ice-creams....ARE YOU TRYING TO MAKE ME CRAVE FOR IT IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT!!!ASDFGHJKLWERTYUJIKL!!! I SWEAR, GIRL, YOU'LL BE THE DEATH OF me!!! But we promise you that there will be an ice-cream scene as one of our previous readers have suggested!! :D And we're literally dying to write about it!!!
Btw, thank you so so sooooooooooooooo much for your wonderful feedbacks!! :D Please keep supporting us this way!!! And leaving such amazing feedbacks cause we always look forward to yours!!!! :D We love you sooo much!!! And we promise to buy you ice-cream soon!! Preferably in Nutella flavor!!! :D Thank you once again, lovely!!! x :D <3 -N.K
Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, lovely!! No way are you an a**hole for telling me the truth!!! We actually love you for being honest about it!!! :D We were starting to think that it was becoming typical so we've decided to take a different turn!!! :D Thank you so so sssssssssooooooooooooooooooooooooo much for your feedback!!
We just wanted to inform you that we're not planning to introduce Eleanor or any of the boys' girlfriends in this story!! As much as we respect them and love them, I guess it becomes extremely typical if we make the boys end up with their real girlfriends or even the OC's best friends!! And we want to keep it as a one direction fanfic!! :)
As for ice-creams....ARE YOU TRYING TO MAKE ME CRAVE FOR IT IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT!!!ASDFGHJKLWERTYUJIKL!!! I SWEAR, GIRL, YOU'LL BE THE DEATH OF me!!! But we promise you that there will be an ice-cream scene as one of our previous readers have suggested!! :D And we're literally dying to write about it!!!
Btw, thank you so so sooooooooooooooo much for your wonderful feedbacks!! :D Please keep supporting us this way!!! And leaving such amazing feedbacks cause we always look forward to yours!!!! :D We love you sooo much!!! And we promise to buy you ice-cream soon!! Preferably in Nutella flavor!!! :D Thank you once again, lovely!!! x :D <3 -N.K
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