Fanfiction 101 - Comments, page 19

Baby Im Gone Gone Gone

Can you review my story " To: Prince Charming" and thank you if you review.

Hii can you review my new story "It's Not What It Looks Like" thanks love xx

I like tay

Hello, I see that you are overwhelmed with your own work and reviews and I hate to add to the load, but I was hoping you could review my story Hey Jude, whenever you have the time.

awe thank you so much! I'm absolutely shocked you gave me a ten but you have no idea how much that means to me! Thank you xx :)

Can you review one of my stories Truly, Madly, Deeply or Who Are You? Or both? I have been wanting for someone to review my story but most of them say it is fantastic and I have absolutely nothing wrong, but sometimes when I go back I am like 'i can't believe I even put that there'. You are honest and I would love for you to review my stories. Thank you. :)

Thank you so much! It means a lot coming from you. :) I will definitely try to go back and re-work it so I can take out that first introduction part.
Thanks again for your time!

Can you review my story "Constellations" and give me advice on the plot?

@ThatRebelGirl

Lol, I'm not tough but I .Like...Or those stories with no punctuation but they have such a good idea. Or when you see some characters that you've seen in other stories. Like use a different Tumblr girl or something :P

@Bradley_Directioner
Right?!?! Not only is that story line is waaaayyy overused, but I also feel offended because it makes girls look week and square compared to guys

Don't you get sick of those fanfictions that are about a good girl falling for a bad boy...like wtf, how orginal. -.-

Holy cow... That's a lot of reviews

i love how you're so straight-up with what you like and don't like. it makes me laugh and most of them are true :D

This is something that really annoys me, so if you want to write a chapter about it or conridict me, please do so. But I really hate it when the story name is either a song (especially by one direction), has nothing to do with the story, or even worse, BOTH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I know that that applies to story (which I wouldn't mind you reviewing if you have time-it's called Decisions), but I find it annoying and unoriginal!!!

I can't believe you actually had to point out the difference between nodding and shaking. What on earth has happened to the world? I mean I understand it's not a universal thing but for the most part in 98% of the world (if I'm correct) it's a pretty standard gesture. Le sigh.. I hope someone learns from this post; even just one person would make a difference and not want me to face palm majorly as I read.

Hey can u check out my story "The Darkness in His Heart" please I'm trying to get my writing better and I think ur opinion would be really helpful thank u :)

You have great friends and, in my opinion, a "barmy" school. I think it's brill that I don't have to deal with beastly people because I'm home schooled. Also your other stories are ace.

Can you review my fanfiction 'Dollhouse' Please, im halfway throught the story and need thoughts on it oe you could read '10 mintues to fall' a Niall horan based fanfic. xx Thanks

I'm so happy ur friends stood up for no one should ever be told to kill themselves and about the pointless holidays part in America I agree completely lol I live in America too