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@Anastasia_Styles-Payne
Oh yeah a Niall POV :) I really like Brittyn's personality, she's funky, independent and strong. Good luck and don't hesitate to message me if you want to talk about your story. I really like it :)
Oh yeah a Niall POV :) I really like Brittyn's personality, she's funky, independent and strong. Good luck and don't hesitate to message me if you want to talk about your story. I really like it :)
@mazza-mazza
I actually wrote this story about a month ago but i got to the part where Brittyn slaps Liam and i stopped writing so the last two chapters i have been completely winging it. im definitly bringing Niall into the equation next chapter. im gonna do a POV from Niall next i believe.
I actually wrote this story about a month ago but i got to the part where Brittyn slaps Liam and i stopped writing so the last two chapters i have been completely winging it. im definitly bringing Niall into the equation next chapter. im gonna do a POV from Niall next i believe.
Do you know where you want them to end up? Make usthem play with each other. Bring in another boy, make Liam struggle more, lol
@mazza-mazza
Im right there with ya. Im racking my brain trying to decide what should happen next lol
Im right there with ya. Im racking my brain trying to decide what should happen next lol
Great new chapters :) I can't wait for Liam and Brittyn to speak again. She shouldn't feel guilty, she didn't sleep with him and she genuinely thought he was single :)
I just thought I would let you know, that I love you. You're an amazing writer and you're my new best friend!
I just read all the chapters and i'm absolutely in love with this story! I cannot wait for you to update!
thanks :)
10/11/13