Just a Fool - Comments

@hormoniall
Incomplete is the sequel to this. ive got a few stories. just click my name and you'll see it.

Sequel!

@mazza-mazza
Ive been racking my brain all night. i dont wanna end this story i just dont know what else to write lol but im definitly gonna think of something.

Leave a gap in time. Make them grow up, change, let Niall and Brittyn's relationship evolves and then bring a twist to it. A blast from the past that would bring Liam and her closer?

Do a sequel of u want but u don't have to just a thought

@Midnight_Memories
Started out like that. My plan was to have them end up together but I changed it up at the last minute.

I thought this was a Liam fanfic lol

NO!! Here's an idea do more Niall romance with Brittyn and then they leave for tour.. So much Gossip going around Brittyn thinks Niall is cheating on her with Demi Lavoto...(Sorry I think I spelled her last name wrong) See where I'm going with this? KEEP UPDATING!!!

Nonononono NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NO ENDING!!!!!

Woopwoop yah budddy

Nrittyn yah . Liam should leave Britty ALONE !!! UPDATE

OMG! Great chapter!!! UPDATE PLEASE!!

great update!

@alovinliam
I like that idea :) You should do it @Anastasia_Styles-Payne

What if niall walked in during the kiss? Like niall beats up liam and tells him to leave and then nial kisses brittyn and they are boyfriend and girlfriend.?

The talk!! I wouldn't resist too so we all forgive Brittyn for not pushing him away :) Niall needs to come in to bring a dramatic effect, lol :)

U should BRITT and NIALL go out !!! UPDATE !!!

Oh Nialler what a sweetheart :) Another great chapter. Love it :)

@so crazy 4 1D
im walking home right now from the bar. as soon as i get home i will update

Update !!!