Those Totally Dumb FanFic Moments [Editing] - Comments, page 4

Hey, you know what I gonna do? I'm gonna make a story with all of these things in it. Her name is going to be Kylie, she's gonna get on a plane crash with Louis and all the other stuff.

I hate it when like for example Kylie gets raped by Harry's friend Niall, so then he apologizes and Kylie forgives just like that so then I'm like WTF! He raped you!! He took your goddamn virginity it's not like once he apologizes and takes the virginity that he had from you and shove it back in! Like wtf? I also hate it when for example Niall is the father of a 3 year old and that he left when Kylie was pregnant cause he thought it would ruin his career then later its like ( 3 years later ) and Kylie suddenly walks into Starbucks and then she sees Niall he notices her and he is just like " please let me see my daughter " for like two times then she is just like " ugh fine come with me "
IT ANNOYS ME WHEN THEY JUST LET IT GO EASILY!!

I hate it when the main character is bullied at school even though she dresses and looks like a victoria secrets model

@Liam's Girl

lol I don't really care if they're through haha . i dont like Sophia and Payzer is STILL my favorite ship so I still use her lol

I love this its hilarious and I HATE it when its always please read my story and that's all you have in your story comments

When Kylie is getting at it with Niall the first half of the book, but that oh, wait. They were just fuck buddies and Kylie was actually dating Harry the whole time. And I'm sitting here going, "the fuck?"

Um, it isnt new years eve yet where I am so......

Always popping the p. always the fucking p.

Because everybody just LOVES Starbucks so there always happens to be one like right next to your house! Seems legit. WELL I FUCKING HATE STARBUCKS NOW! Them white girls with their iPhones, yoga pants, and UGGs just ruined it. And i am a fucking white girl.... Now that is saying something.

Danielle is always Liam's GF. GUYS, THEY ARE THROUGH. GET. OVER. IT.

It's not even 12 here yet :( still 9

@Missy
Aw thanks! Hope your having fun on your holidays!

@ticklemeLiam
BABE! Yours is different, yours is based around the coma where as some author just through a coma in there because they can't think of anything else. And I kinda love yours, I may be biased but WHO GIVES A FUCK!

I didn't realize how many complaints I had...
This is more of an author thing not really a fanfic. But when an author makes an author's note on a story i like and are all "i don't think anybody likes my story" yea. Uh huh. Poor fucking you!!! That's why you have over three fucking hundred subscribers!!! We all know you're just looking for sympathy so suck up your fake problems, swallow your pride and start typing your next update bitch.
yeah... sorry. I'm a little tired and stressed today...

Also! Super short chapters. I hate it when the story looks pretty good but then the chapters are like 2 paragraphs. But wait I'm not done the author won't update because they can't think of anything put or some stupid shit. You could make her get in the car and still go over your precious 2 paragraph limit!

I hate it when people have fanfics where they have kids now. But the kids are like 3 years old. But everyone's age is 18 and shit. Woah. Teen pregnancy much? I though we were supposed to be against that?!

I just read 35 and I can't stop laughing. These are all hilarious!

uh 82..? Thanks -.-

I just noticed, you have 127 subscribers.................. And chapter coma......... Yep.

Hahahaha Home Alone :)

where i am, tomorrow is Louis' birthday/Christmas eve. and the day after that is of course Christmas

There's a literally a day between our timezones. x3

no wait... It's like 12:35...
i guess it's TECHNICALLY Louis' birthday..

Merry Chrismas (And all dem others)

and YESH HIGH FIVES ALL 'ROUND!