Those Totally Dumb FanFic Moments [Editing] - Comments, page 24

Reads... "'....and even pounce...'"
xD I can't stop giggling...

Ahahhahahha omg the one with the lion made me crack up so bad!!!!! XD

I freaking hate it when the image of what Kylie looks like is....

ASHLEY BENSON!

or

TROJAN BELLISARIO!

or

LUCY HALE!


Any girl from Pretty Little Liars!

I mean it gets freaking on my nerves it's like

GO FIND A RANDOM TUMBLR GIRL PICTURE!


ANYONE BUT FREAKING ASHLEY BENSON, TROJAN BELLISARIO, OR LUCY HALE I MEAN C'MON!


PLL is one of the top hit shows on TV, they go to every awards show, how does One Direction not recognize them!

It's like Kylie goes up to Harry


Harry : Hey aren't you that girl from that show?

Kylie : Uhhmm no? I'm Lucy Hale! :D

hav u ever noticed, the girls dont shave, or thyll mention a pet once in like the first chapter thn never again

I really hate it when people don't acknowledge that girls have periods!!! I mean, there 19 or something, so there's at be so sung seriously wrong with their bodies if they never get them!!! And ignoring them won't make them go go away!

What's up with Kylie? Lol it hilarious tho... :)

KYLIE!! WHY MUST YOUBE SO BOSSY AND IGNORANT AND IDIODIC AND (Are there ANY upsides to Kylie?)

@Missy
I read a story like that, lol. And guess what? The chick that was writing it kept complaining and complaining about how hard it was to update and so now the story is on hold because she CAN'T GET OFF HER LAZY ARSE TO WRITE ONE PARAGRAPH! eh, people.

@i_am_fabulouis
HAHAHAHAHAHA, that was so me at that moment c:

No no I cannot right now.Dont you hate when the authors make the shortest freckin chapters their not even chapters,their mother fucking sentences.A first grader would read it in less than 5 minutes,I'm just sitting their like "BITCH I SUBSCRIBES TO YOU CUZ I THOUGHT IT WOULD BE GOOD BUT HELLA NO *unsubscribes*.
let me just show you what my eyes were in pain of:
Ericas POV~
I wake up and go downstairs to get food and i text Louis "hey Louis whats up" and i get no respond.He never awnsers me,so not a big deal.I get ready for school and i get in my car and drive to school to see my bff,Zoey. I walk up to her to her and say"hey Zoey whats up" as we walked up to school.

That at was the whole freckin chapter *faceplams*

@Oreoslivelong

Hahaha:)

@KEVIN!
OMG! It is really hard to type right now cause I sprained my wrist, but I was reading your comment in the middle of Geography, and my teacher peopled at me like I was crazy. I totally am the same way..

@Missy
Ikr! xD

@i_am_fabulouis
Lol this is me when I see this story updated

@JustKeepSwimmingStyles

*Slowly backs away, putting my hands up in surrender*

:Hey can I have a piece of dat popcorn? :D

@Miss M
Lol sorry for flipping out at u
ps I happen to like flipping out at people it enjoys me I don't know why...... I guess I'm weird that way

@JustKeepSwimmingStyles
Shut up :)

@Miss M, @Awesome_girl_123 & @i_am_fabulouis

*pulls out popcorn and sits back in chair*

@Awesome_girl_123
I wasn't bad mouthing Twilight, I'm a fan, but I don't think the whole "this is my territory" works for most fan fictions. Plus, it was an example of where I had seen it. Not a jab.

@i_am_fabulouis
Lol! :) my inner fangirl can be....... Well lets just say that I'm very protective over Twilight (and 1D couse if I weren't then why would I be on this website)