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Undercover - Comments, page 5

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Harry's dad is just like any other dad! But more badass!
her plan obviously worked = )
i think she thought he doesn't really care about her so she's surprised to have him rescue her.
ITS A FUCKING TRAP!!!!!
i really love this story so much!!

ThatBlueThing ThatBlueThing
12/31/13

I think Belle wanted to handle something on her own

LexiandMarcel LexiandMarcel
12/31/13

I like this chapter a lot and her reaction, what the fuck are youdoing here, I lliterally laughed, she can take care of herself

Cheese Cake Eater Cheese Cake Eater
12/31/13

update soon

Cheese Cake Eater Cheese Cake Eater
12/31/13

please update

Cheese Cake Eater Cheese Cake Eater
12/31/13

I think Belle is relief to see Harry, but not happy

Liliana_ Liliana_
12/31/13

This does count as a comment. Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Wey Hey Wey Hey
12/31/13

I like Harry's dad and I think he really regrets what he did to Harry's mom and he's trying to make up for it. I think what happened with belle was that they got her to the place and she attacked and used one of their phones to call perrie for help. I don't think belle is happy to see Harry because she was doing just fine in her own and now he had to barge in and kind of discover that she's a badass. I think OGs gang was planning an attack on Harry

Emilayyyy Emilayyyy
12/31/13

Okay not to be rude but FUCKING UPDATE :) plz?

Natalia_Taylor_Zieroth Natalia_Taylor_Zieroth
12/27/13

@Taijah Elizares
No don't apologize! Thanks for looking out for me :)

Narry4life Narry4life
12/26/13

@Narry4life
NP and yeah I was just you know watching cause it happends a lot ppl steals stories and stuff so yeah and soz for wasting time ..

happilyxmelancholic happilyxmelancholic
12/26/13

omg you updated!!!! well i have no idea what they want with hary, i don't think her plan will work ( i mean it would be awesome and kickass but then the point of calling daddy styles would be lost), i think perrie trust harold with the big stuff but not on the details, and well things can only go badly with daddy styles right? i love this story pls update!

M.J. M.J.
12/26/13

@Taijah Elizares
I have checked out the fighter thanks for telling me! The writer has messaged me and she's very sweet and I have a feeling she'll be going in a different direction with her story. But thanks for noticing it and notifying me because I'll admit, I do get a bit jealous that she's getting better stats on her story but she's a great writer so it ok. If it does get too similar I'll talk to her but thanks :)


Narry4life Narry4life
12/26/13

1. I think they want to kill Harry
2. No
3. Yes
4. I'm not actually sure about this one...

Mrs.Malik_is_me Mrs.Malik_is_me
12/26/13

Hello isnt this like The Fighter" I mean like check it out like foreals cause its like taking advantage of somebodys work unless you have permission you can stop reading ....

happilyxmelancholic happilyxmelancholic
12/26/13

Oooh shit just got real. Harry's gonna go all making alliances and shit and soon enough... FUCKING MAJOR GANG WAR!!!!!!! Oh and I reeeeally love this story!

ThatBlueThing ThatBlueThing
12/20/13

omg belle nooo .Hes gonna rescue her and shit .I thought belle wouldve beaten the shit out of one of the gang members cuz you know she a cop.

curls-lover curls-lover
12/20/13

Oh NOOOOOO NOT BELLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bookworm Bookworm
12/20/13

OH SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!! :P IM DIEING!!!!!!

HipstaGurl HipstaGurl
12/19/13

jesus no you have to update!!! harry save the girl!!!

M.J. M.J.
12/19/13