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@narry4life yeah it was just funny how it ended

@Lnp99
You are so sweet :) thank you!

I have to say you are a beautiful writer. The fanfiction I have seen in this story are full of mistakes and hard to fully understand but yours is just written very well. Honestly besides the names of the boys in the story I forgot that this was a One Direction fanfiction, and thought of it more as short story. The characters are great and the plot line is well out together and the describitive writing is done beautifully. I look forward to more

OMG !!! Sooooo cute !
They need to be together !!! I love this story soooooooooo much !!! Please update sooner ...

1. YESSSSS BELLE AND HARRY NEED TO BE TOGETHER. THEY WILL BE TOGETHER<3
2. Favorite line? "I have never wanted to kiss someone so badly in my life." So frickin adorable Harryyyy:)
3. As soon as they break the kiss, I hope Belle stares at Harry and kisses him again:)
Aww I love your story! But I'm really curious to what Harry is gonna do to get his "edge" back...anyway, PLEEEASE update ASAP I loveee it:) <3<3<3

I think they should but then again i dont think they should... Belle is either gonna hurt harry or someone else or get hurt and they might... Its wishy washy cuz harry is unpredictable.. Belle loved that kiss.. She melted i bet!! And favorite quote would be: " people seem to mask black as darkness, but there is turly a hidden beauty to it "

Ok i read the first chapter and im done.. Im hooked!!!! XD your a great writter!

omg a kiss!!! and purple is my favourite colour too!

Loveee. LoVe.
LOVEEE!

OMG HARRY IS IN LOVE!

just gotta love this story no matter what happens!

Ahh! They're soo in loveee!

This story is amazing! And I saw that you needed one more vote, so I gladly rated it 10 stars:) You have a true gift and I hope you continue to write more stories!;)

Love the story it's brilliant and very funny--not to mention how cute Harry is being:) <3

Oh this was indeed a bit of a rollercoster. Yeah she was really rude but so was harry. They both were wrong and right in some points. Despite that the music really did fit perfectly. Please update soon

I literally almost cried!! I felt so bad for Harry--he was crushed! But when he walked in and he smiled at Belle I remember somewhat leaping out of my bed and jumping for joy..:) haha I LOVE the story. Definitely one of the best I have ever read. You're super talented and I hope you know that! Anyway, you're killing me! I need to know what happens next! Please update soon!!! Ahh, I'm obsessed:) <3<3<3

Omg!!!! Belle is such a badass!!!!

I kinda want to know why belle is so mad at harry when she says "what the fuck are you doing here?!" in the end

I love this story so far!

Woah, Harry's dad really is badass.
Yeah she totally kicked the asses to the curb. Ha. I will say her plan really did work.
She seemed a little mad to see Harry because she was probably Q and A ing them if you understood that.
And Finally, FUCK YEAH!!!!! THEY MOST LIKELY HAD IT ALL PLANED OUT!!!!!!!! And now I think Bella is REALLY badass.