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When Harry finds out he's gonna be like what the freak?! OMG what if he thinks Zayn made her throw up? I'm dying here woman!!!!
Holy shit......I love this story so much! you are an amazing writer and I cant wait for the next update!!!
@lalaladooo
Aww I'm so glad you liked it!! I promise to update the second I have the time. It's been a really busy week but I might be able to find time in the next 24 hours hopefully. I'm like internally fangirling that you like my story haha xo
okay woman. took me five hours but i finished so if you don't update now there will be problems. :D BYEEE
@zaynisthebestest
you BET it gets better!!! my contacts are so dry because i dont even blink when i read cuz its so freaking good
:D
@lalaladooo
Awww thank you so much!! It seriously means so much to me that you like my story since you know obsessed I am with yours ;) if you've still only read the first few chapters I promise you it does get better and more interesting xoxo
@realniallgirl
aww thanks. I'll update ASAP I've had the buisiest week seriously I have had no time
GURL WHY DID YOU NOT RECCOMEND ME TO READ YOUR STORY. I JUST WASTED LIKE TWO HOURS TRYING TO FIND A GOOD STORY TO READ AND THEN I FOUND THIS AND SAW WHO IT WAS BY AND I WAS LIKE OMG I KNOW HER. well not really know her but you know what i mean. anyways, i've only read like the first three chapters but ti's already REALLY GOOD
GURL WHY DID YOU NOT RECCOMEND ME TO READ YOUR STORY. I JUST WASTED LIKE TWO HORUS TRYING TO FIND A GOOD STORY TO READ AND THEN I FOUND THIS AND SAW WHO IT WAS BY AND I WAS LIKE OMG I KNOW HER. well not really know her but you know what i mean. anyways, i've only read like the first three chapters but ti's already REALLY GOOD
@fascinated
Haha I'm not going to tell you if its a good or bad thing, you'll have to wait and see ;)
I don't know if that's a good thing or bad thing anymore @zaynisthebestest... But I'm looking forward to it all the same :)
@fascinated
Yea ex counciler was a pretty good guess :) and I'll update as soon as I find time. I'm really eager to since the next chapter has A LOT of drama in it
I think ex counselor was a pretty good guess @zaynisthebestest, and I haven't given up on Eliza being related to one of them yet ;) And I get what you mean about homework; my teachers pile it on like there's no tomorrow!!!! I'm glad my predictions inspire you, and I hope you can take a recreational break for an update soon :)
@fascinated
Babe I honestly don't care about your grammar :) I love reading your predictions they are so interesting and they inspire me to change what I'm going to write or alter things or give me ideas. I feel I owe it to you to tell you this since I'm not going to specifically say it in the fic since I didn't actually realise that people were wondering who he was, but I feel its only fair to tell you. Riley is not an ex-counciler. He is just someone who knows her really well and has known her for a long time. Sorry for crushing that little prediction but after the whole 'Eliza must be related to her' I thought I owed it to you to tell you before you became as set on this idea as you did the last. I will update as soon as I can, I speant over 6 hours doing homework today :/ but hopefully my teachers will be nicer this week. Bye xoxo
WHO WAS/IS RIELY????????? I'm betting on ex counselor, but they became friends. And when I think Louis will confront Bella, and she'll get really pissy and deny it and yell. And then he'll tell Harry, and Harry will yell and Bella will yell and then she'll break down in tears. But when Harry shows Bella the note form her mother (he will eventually), she'll go super quiet and ask in a soft but threatening voice for how long he had it, and he'll be like uhhhhhh since the airport, and she'll say really softly at first then get louder till she yells why didn't you tell me, and he'll be like I wanted to protect you! but she'll be like don't try to do that and he'll be like I need to you know your past and we'll learn a whole lot more about Bella.
I just realized that when I write my predictions I use shocking grammar, but I asure you I don't normally write like that :)
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My prediction from last chapter WILL happen in the next one. It's in perfectly, because Zayn will be like this is enough I'm telling Harry.
And I think Bella is stupid for doing all of that. First of all, she's always told she's pretty, and second, Bella is strong and smart enough to know that looks don't matter. She could weight 200kg and have to ugliest faces known to man, but as long as she doesn't dream to be a supermodel, it doesn't matter what you look like, just how you think and act. I do understand why Bella doesn't stop and think before doing that to herself; how much does it really matter?
3/20/14