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ALDOWKSKFWKDKDKFKFK HOLY FUCKING SHIT IM CRYING PLEASD PLEASE UPDATE AND YES YPU BETTER NAKE A SEQUEL OR OR I WILL CRY FORECER
YOU. HAVE. TO. UPDATE! Like I was literally crying by the end of the chapter, especially because of the cliffhanger. What are you doing to me? PLEASE make a sequel, I love this story so much. :)
NOOOOOOOOOO
okay okay okay okay okay okaayyyy i know everything's gonna go fine since theres gonna be a sequel but NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
:'''''''(
@AisforAlisonotAmateur
I got emotional editing it....I was sort of like 'what did you just write' glad you liked the chapter xo
@fascinated
you don't know what will happen next X___x oh my god I am seriously so proud of myself right now. The fact that you don't know what will happen is honestly a massive achievement to me (which really shows you how pathetic my life is ). I'm working on the next chapter now so I'll update it when I can. Getting a bunch of needles tomorrow for when I go overseas in a few months so I'll try to write it today and update sometime tomorrow or Saturday.
@Just_a_teenage_dirtbag
Yeah I had a similar reaction while re-reading it.....
i read this chapter on my way to school....lets just say i shouldn't have because i was so close to crying the whole time :P
Great chap :) and hope u did well in ur exams :D
update soon :*
I know I haven't commented in a whole, but that's because I've had exams and assignments as well :'( BUT THIS IS SOOOOOOO GOOD!!! I like the way that no one understands her. So many people feel that way, yet often authors never write about that feeling, which gives of the horrible illusion that is perfection. Yuh. But for the first time, I don't know what will happen next. I think either Bella will that she wants to do counseling instead of a psychiatric ward, or that she will say that it would be better for her in a ward. But Harry's really the only reason she's trying, so she'll probably chose to stay with Harry. Please update soon :*
@Lazylazerpants
Thanks. I did my best to try and show throughout the chapter the difference between her admitting she had a problem and her accepting it, and the fact that she kept going back on her thoughts and telling herself she didn't have a problem. Anyway I'll update as soon as I can. School for this term only has 2 days left so I'm hoping to update sometime on the weekend once school is done. (Melbourne time)
@FuTuRe_Ms_HoRaN!
Aww thanks, love you too xo
@Franny
Aww I'm glad...not that you were almost in tears, but that my writing was actually able to make others feel emotions
Holy cow, what an intense chapter. It's hard admitting you have a problem, wether it be an eating disorder, or self harm. I'm glad she finally admitted it and is willing to get help. Us girls gotta stay strong. Amazing chapter.
I'm going to cry!!!!!:(
4/13/14