Inherent - Comments, page 7

I'm usually not a commenter on stories, but after reading your Author's Note, I had to write this. First of all, I want to tell you that you have exceptional writing skills. Second, I completely agree with you when you say that you don't want to rush Julia and Harry's relationship. One of my stories is something along the lines, and I completely understand you there. A good author doesn't rush things, and write as you please, it's your story and you know where it is going. Basically what I' trying to say is that I look forward to the updates on this story, and I love the long chapters. Keep writing, and try not to feel too let down on the hate-ish sorta comments (I know it's hard). Whenever you feel bad about it, remember that you are an amazing writer.
xxx

NOOOO!! LONG LONG CHAPTERS <3
I FALL IN LOVE WITH UR STORY EVERY DAY EVEN MORE <3 :D :D :D :D

I love the long chapters! i dont like the short choppy chapters that others put out! can't wait until the next chapter is up! i look forward to this story everyday!

LOVE reading the story from Harry's POV. I like getting to see what's going on inside his head. It add an entirely new dimension to the story. Can't wait for the next chapter! I don't mind it being one long chapter, but that's just me! <3

In the end of this chapter, I felt like the next chapter should be Harry's POV and when I read the notes, I got exited about next chapter. Please keep it in one piece, I just love to read long chapters. And I definately love reading Harry's POV. About this chapter, I kept smiling all the way through the times Julia smiled, and I realized I must look stupid when I read and my emotions switch like Julia's. I know I'm reading a good story when it effects me like that. Not even half of the stories I read give me that. So yeah, your story is awesome <3 :) Also, when Harry tested Julia's trust, I found it so cool, nice, I don't even know how to describe, but it left a good feeling in me :) I'm glad that Julia finally got her doubts put in rest, at least for a while. It seems like she's finally starting to trust herself too. I find it interesting how you manage to make these chapters always so good, that everytime I see this story's been updated, I immediately must read it. And I can't stop until I've read it all. Basically I love this story and how Julia and Harry are who they are and do what they do. I'm sensing that there will be some trouble from uncle Joe's direction, am I right? I just hope nothing will ruin the relationship Julia and Harry have. I could speak forever but I think I'll just put it into one more sentence, I love this story :) <3

Split into two parts please

SLIGHT cliffhanger? UNDERSTATEMENT!! haha. Can't wait for the next chapter! That's the second chapter that's had me in tears.

Shes so broken and he wants to fix heir but she keeps her walls up too high

Sweet baby Jesus, you're killing me! I'm dying for the next chapter! :)

Oh cliffhanger. Next chapter coming soon? This chapter left a calm feeling in me even with the cliffhanger and I felt like I really was there, lying on the ground looking at stars with them. You're so good, you make these scenes feel so real! I love it how Harry knows exactly what to do and say. Oh l wish I'd have a boyfriend like that. Anyway I loved this chapter like I've liked all the others too! <3

Slight cliffhanger?
Im on the edge of my seat :P
Amazing chapter <3 everytime u post a new chapter the more i fall in love with ur story :*
oh wait....i already have :D

@wild rover You are more than welcome! I truly love this story! :)

@Dominique_Sara
Hey, I'd just like to thank you for your comments on this story :) They mean so much to me! I'm going to update either tomorrow or Sunday! Thanks again!

@PLLTVD0723
Oh my goodness! Thank you so, so much!! Haha you are seriously the best. I think you might be the first person who has said they've cried :) Emily Rudd plays Julia--she's a model I found on Tumblr. Once again, thank you so much!

Every moment Julia gets closer to telling him! I can't wait until she finally does! The passion and tension between them is so exquisitely tangible, I can't wait to see what happens next! :)

Absolutely amazing.

Holy Fuck how do u do it?
I am not an emotional person AT ALL ! like everyone could be crying while watching a movie and i will be sitting there staring at them dumbly wondering why the hell they're crying ! yet a story that is WRITTEN made me cry !
U ARE EXTRAORDINARY MY FRIEND <3
im am utterly in love with this story <3
its amazing and if anyone convinces u otherwise i will fucking murder them :P
NEVER STOP WRITING THIS STORY <3
btw who plays Jules ? :)

Loveeeeeeeee it! Absolutely amazing

I loved this chapter! Harry's gifts were lovely. But I can't help wishing that Julia would "man up" and tell Harry about her heart. I have a feeling he'll want her regardless. Can't wait for the next chapter!!! :)

This was a fantastic chapter, yet again! I really want a necklace like that now lol I guess I know what I telling my future bf to get me lmmfao