Inherent - Comments, page 6

What is up with Louis?
And where is harry taking her?
UGH.... u know what i hate about u updating? it is probably because i have to wait again for a new chap :(
Btw congrats on 50 subscribers :D

Interesting chapter! I'm convinced that Louis knew Caleb in some fashion or another. I can't wait to see how that part of the story unfolds. Can't wait to see what the next chapter holds for Harry and Julia!

Louis totally knew Caleb. There's no other explanation. I wonder what went on between them. GAH, I hope you update soon!

I hope we get some Harry POV and Jules tells him her secret

@Lazylazerpants
It is a fairly important scene and it will showcase all the progress Harry and Julia make in their relationship :) Thank you for you answer!

@afanoftheunkown02
Hahaha awesome, thank you for your input! It seems to be unanimous, so I'm going to include it :) I will definitely post a warning beforehand. Thanks again!

@StarStruck14

Thanks you for you answer! I will definitely insert a warning in the chapter subtitle so everyone sees it :) I love writing Harry's POV--in fact, quite a few of the later chapters when we get into the climax of the story will be in his point of view. As for right now, I do have a chapter planned for him in (I think) three or four chapters! Thank you for your comment!

In answer to your question... yes, Yes, YES!! I definitely want to see/read that part as it's such a special part of their relationship and it's a big part of the story. Maybe you could post a warning that the more mature parts of the chapter(s) are coming up so those who might be uncomfortable can make the decision to skip over that part. But you have my vote to include that in the upcoming chapters!

BTW... LOVE this chapter and am always anxiously awaiting for new chapters to be posted. Any chance you'll be planning to write a chapter from Harry's POV again??

IS THAT A SERIOUS QUESTION?
YES! of course u have to cuz its such a big part of the story :) the people who dont want to read it ...well then just give them a warning or something :D
I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS NEW CHAPTER <3

For sure! I mean the first time is the most important time and we have to know how Julia handles it.

@afanoftheunkown02
Hey! Thank you so much for your comments, they seriously mean the world to me :) The next chapter is the party, and I've just posted it! I hope you like it :)

OMFG!!
I READ THIS WHEN IT WAS LIKE POSTED A FEW SECONDS AGO BUT COULDN'T COMMENT CUZ I WAS ON MY PHONE AND IDK WHY IT DOESNT MAKE ME COMMENT :D
OMG OMG OMG !!! IS THE NEXT CHAP GONNA BE THE PARTY ?????????

Omg :P i was so excited for this that i woke up in the middle of the night (becuz diff time zones and all) accidentally and just as i was about to sleep again i remembered u posting a new chap so i was like "HEEELLLL TO THEE NOOO" I had an hour to sleep but spent half of it reading the chap and the other half re-reading my fav parts :D
U R AN INCREDIBLE WRITER <3 I DONT KNOW WHAT WOULD HAPPEN IF U STOP :)
i dont mean to sound perverted but pleaaasseee ........ MORE MAKE OUT SCENES (or something more if u want) :P dont judge me :P cant wait for the next one

My dad got pepper sprayed in the face when he was in the police academy, he said it hurts like a bitch lol. Anyway, I totally know why he's giving her the pepper spray. He's afraid one of the people from 'the club' are gunna come for her to get to him even though he destroyed the phone with her picture. I hope it doesn't come to that cuz knowing Julia she probably won't even think to use the pepper spray.

Anyway, great chapter. Can't wait for your update =]

Today before I went to school i was like feeling soooo sad for no reason and nothing could lift my spirits up. But when i was waiting for the bus i was checking on my phone if any fanfic im reading had updated, AND YOU DID :D I swear i had the biggest grin on my face EVER. so thank u for updating and the amazing chapter and for making my WHOLE day at school a million times BETTER <3 cant wait for the next one :D

I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Like always praise to you and the story

Ashton

Lol Jules overthinks so much that it makes her clueless to everything lol. Can't wait for the next chapter!

@Dominique_Sara
Thanks again for the awesome comment! I like this Harry too, he's very interesting to write about :) My twitter name is wildrovxr!

Yet again you have blown me away. This is an incredible chapter. I kind of like frightening, dangerous Harry! What is your twitter name?

LOVED the new chapter from Harry's POV. I love getting to know more of his back story.
To be honest, I love how you've presented this story. It keeps me on the edge of my seat, always wanting more. While I can't wait for Julia to tell Harry about her heart condition, I completely agree with you that there wouldn't be much of a story if she told him right off the bat. Well, there would be, but then the story wouldn't leave us always wanting more and waiting in agonizing (good agonizing) anticipation for the next chapter! Basically what I'm getting at is, I love your writing, I love the direction you're taking the story in, and I enjoy the excitement of seeing a new chapter posted. Love the longer chapters too by the way. Keep doing what you're doing because you're an incredible writer!