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OPEN ME! YOU WONT REGRET IT lol, page 19

@rocker_babe
Naming chapters is hard! I did this once with a fanfic of mine but that was also the last time I tried that :P

@ramona.
for my story moonlace

Call it hakuna matitties

@rocker_babe
Hehehehehe

tkstylist tkstylist
2/4/16

@tkstylist
really? :) guffaw

@XKALEIGHSTYLES57X
hi there :) how are you?

ramona. ramona.
2/4/16

@ramona.

I'm doing pretty good, I reckon. How are you? :)

Guys, anything to help with swelling?

@XKALEIGHSTYLES57X
not bad! trying to get my head around how this place all works.




@rocker_babe

have you tried a cold compress?

ramona. ramona.
2/5/16

@ramona.
ice pack? yes

@rocker_babe
yeah - that's what i meant. i'm not too sure what else you can do for swelling apart from making sure the body part that is swelling is elevated so that blood runs from it and not to it.

ramona. ramona.
2/5/16

@ramona.
I have my foot propped up on the grand piano...

(It is quite uncomfortable, tbh)

Anyway, thank you for your help! ^^

Does anyone have any tips on writing combat?

I need it for Moonlace :)

@ramona.
You're new to the site? I guess I missed that aha.

@rocker_babe
you're welcome! sorry i couldn't be of more help.
like fighting combat? war style or like two people swinging punches at each other in the street kind of thing?



@XKALEIGHSTYLES57X
oh it's okay :) i probably should have been clearer in my introduction :)

ramona. ramona.
2/5/16

@ramona.
Well, one-on-one, not war, but not street lol

More like sword vs sword, knife vs dagger, bow/arrows vs throwing knives, etc

Medieval time fighting

Like, something like in chapter three, but I don't want to write repeated scenes

Payphone is a good song...

And Isolation (Lucas King)

@ramona.
No you're fine! I just probably didn't bother to read back on the earlier pages. I just chimed in and noticed a new person :)

@rocker_babe
let me take a read and i'll see if i can help you :)
also - check out this :)


@XKALEIGHSTYLES57X
you're so sweet and friendly :) just like everyone around here seems to be x

ramona. ramona.
2/5/16

@ramona.
Whoa where did you find that?!

Thank you so so so much! ^u^

@rocker_babe

it's a resource i use to use when i wrote stories :)

ramona. ramona.
2/5/16

@ramona.
Woah woah woah...

Alright, I'm looking forward to yer first story [lol]