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OPEN ME! YOU WONT REGRET IT lol, page 19
@XKALEIGHSTYLES57X
not bad! trying to get my head around how this place all works.
@rocker_babe
have you tried a cold compress?
@rocker_babe
yeah - that's what i meant. i'm not too sure what else you can do for swelling apart from making sure the body part that is swelling is elevated so that blood runs from it and not to it.
@ramona.
I have my foot propped up on the grand piano...
(It is quite uncomfortable, tbh)
Anyway, thank you for your help! ^^
Does anyone have any tips on writing combat?
I need it for Moonlace :)
@rocker_babe
you're welcome! sorry i couldn't be of more help.
like fighting combat? war style or like two people swinging punches at each other in the street kind of thing?
@XKALEIGHSTYLES57X
oh it's okay :) i probably should have been clearer in my introduction :)
@ramona.
Well, one-on-one, not war, but not street lol
More like sword vs sword, knife vs dagger, bow/arrows vs throwing knives, etc
Medieval time fighting
Like, something like in chapter three, but I don't want to write repeated scenes
@ramona.
No you're fine! I just probably didn't bother to read back on the earlier pages. I just chimed in and noticed a new person :)
@rocker_babe
let me take a read and i'll see if i can help you :)
also - check out this :)
@XKALEIGHSTYLES57X
you're so sweet and friendly :) just like everyone around here seems to be x
@rocker_babe
Naming chapters is hard! I did this once with a fanfic of mine but that was also the last time I tried that :P
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