Would anyone be interested in.., page 2

Ok this is crazy I mean we just uploaded one chapter and so far we have been rated a 10.0 and have subscribers I like that keep it up guys

@audrey.
oh also check out my other story half a heart It's not formatted right now but i'm going to edit once I get feedback

@My H. Styles
Could you also check out mine? Dystopia?

sure I'll do it tommorow I'm in college and my class is getting ready to start

I'd be interested :)

@audrey.


So I read your story and it is excellent. I liked the description used and the character development. The only thing I really noticed grammar wise was watch out for run-on sentences. I noticed a couple and I only point it out because they can get confusing.
Keep up the good work :)
xoxo Abby

@audrey.
hey could you take another look at mistakes and see if that's the formatt you were talking about please thanks!!

@lyrics.tell.my.story
Yeah I've noticed I do that myself but I'm guilty because I need to pack in information. I'll totally work on it though. I've noticed short and sharp sentences work best.

@My H. Styles
Yep, just remember to go back and capitalize :)

ok

@audrey.
definitely I'm pretty guilty of it myself. :)

on a side note could you guys check out my story Love and Songwriting and let me know what you think?

@lyrics.tell.my.story
Of course! Ill check once I get home. Have been super busy :(

@lyrics.tell.my.story
Let me know if my comment worked. I tried posting two, but I can only see multiples of one.

@audrey.
I'd love to take part in such a group ^^ if you're not too many already ^^ but how does it work ? :)

@audrey.
I'd be interested :)

@ChloeSpark & @illuminaughty

awesome! Basically we're all throwing our stories up for each other to critique and get advice frim

Hey i wanna join too.... can i please????

@audrey.
Hey Audrey, so I read your story ^^ I didn't quite understand everything (but that was probably because I as reading at one o'clock in the morning --') but I liked it, the writing style is quite similar to mine, so it kinda gave a homie vibe ^^ nonetheless, "the newest kind of company" is not English , it made me laugh because I do the same kind of "mistakes" (or I don't know about it yet ^^). Otherwise I like the fact that it is different from the usual fanfiction so I guess you should keep it that way ^^

but I wonder what's going on with her sister and if Harry will help, betray or hurt her ^^ but the story only has 2 chapters yet so I can't say much more about it except that I would gladly read more of it ^^

lots of love