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Would anyone be interested in..

Homepage › Forums › One Direction › Would anyone be interested in..

..starting up a group that reviews each others stories and critiques and gives feedback and all in general just works to make an awesome environment where we can come together to ask questions and get ideas and toss up storylines and etc etc?

I think it'd be super fun.
Anyone interested?

Ohsugarbitch! Ohsugarbitch!
9/21/14

I'd be interested :)

Daphne.Last Daphne.Last
9/21/14

That would be fun!When should we start a.

Vanilla. Vanilla.
9/21/14

@Daphne.Last
Awesome!!

@Swiftioner136
As soon as you guys would! Unless we can recruit more peeps

Ohsugarbitch! Ohsugarbitch!
9/21/14

Great so are you gonna invite us to be the co authors?

Vanilla. Vanilla.
9/21/14

Wait!I already have one person that wants do this so let me send you guys a message.

Vanilla. Vanilla.
9/21/14

Have you guys read the message?

Vanilla. Vanilla.
9/21/14

I want to join :)

ciaoniccie ciaoniccie
9/21/14

@ciaoniccie
Great!How do you add another person to a convo?

Vanilla. Vanilla.
9/21/14

I have no idea :/

ciaoniccie ciaoniccie
9/22/14

You can't. You have to set up an entire new convo.

Ohsugarbitch! Ohsugarbitch!
9/22/14

that sounds like a great idea ! I am in if you're still interested in newcomers

dontjockmystyles dontjockmystyles
9/23/14

This sounds cool if you guys are still looking gor people I could help :)

Mrs.Calum Horan Mrs.Calum Horan
9/23/14

Yeah of course. Please note this isnt to review other peoples work but give advice, constructive criticism and help to wach other xx

Ohsugarbitch! Ohsugarbitch!
9/23/14

@audrey.
Hey I'd like too if that's ok

LoveMeLikeYouDO LoveMeLikeYouDO
9/23/14

@My H. Styles
Of course :)

Does anyone have a story they'd like us to read and give feedback on to get the ball rolling?

otherwise i'll throw up my story Dystopia.

Ohsugarbitch! Ohsugarbitch!
9/23/14

@audrey.
Yes it's called Mistakes and me and my friend Niallers Nandoes have put up the first chapter so please give us some feedback

LoveMeLikeYouDO LoveMeLikeYouDO
9/23/14

@My H. Styles
Can do! I'll read it once I get off my phone and small text is easier on the eyes x

Ohsugarbitch! Ohsugarbitch!
9/23/14

ok thanks:)

LoveMeLikeYouDO LoveMeLikeYouDO
9/23/14

@My H. Styles
Alright, you need to get to formatting that story because with the next all blocked and scrunched up like that, its almost impossible to read.

Your characters give a little too much away; perhaps take away some of them and add them in as the story starts and they begin to appear; but I feel with seeing them and with what you've written in the descriptions, I could almost guess where the story is going which is whatyou don't want - you want people to read and be curious and get excited over what might happen.

Also be careful of your grammar and use of "quotation marks". If you're starting a line of speech, space it out from the rest of the text to make it reader friendly and so we definitely know whats going on.

Fixing a few things though and you'll defintely be on the right track. I am yet to see a story like this based off Niall so things could turn interesting very quickly xx

Ohsugarbitch! Ohsugarbitch!
9/23/14