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Alcoholics Anonymous

Form:
-Title: Alcoholics Anonymous
-Author: JasperRenee
-Number of chapters: Four
-Band: One Direction
-Content rating: R
-Link: Alcoholics Anonymous
-Genre(s): Drama, Tragedy, Thriller

Title: Alcoholics Anonymous
Author: JasperRenee
Book Link: Alcoholics Anonymous
Review: Really smooth at parts- I don’t really have enough chapters to judge. But seriously it is really good so far- I’ll be reading it from now on (:
My Opinion: I love it! I love your writing, too. Amazing writer.
Rating: 9/10
Story Grammar: Really really great
My grammar cop side was happy (:
Story Flow: Moved at a slow pace which is good- but since there isn’t many chapters I’m still a little confused on it because some topics have yet to be explained
Tips: Keep it going!!
Recommendation: 8/10

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Hey, love! Are you still doing these reviews?

twoghosts
8/19/18

Title: Fallen Angel
Author: Prinny1321
Number of Chapters: 4 (currently)
Band: One Direction and 5SOS
Content Rating: NC17
Link: http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/90916/Fallen-Angel/
Genres: Romance, Adventure and Fantasy

Prinny1321
8/17/18

Title: Only You
Author: Prinny1321
Number of Chapters: 56 (currently)
Band: One Direction (Harry focused)
Content Rating: NC17
Link: http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/90226/Only-You/
Genres: Romance, Comedy and Drama

Prinny1321
8/17/18

-Title: // Denude //
-Author: PerciaxXXx
-Number of chapters: 5 (currently)
-Band (One Direction or 5SOS): Harry Styles
-Content rating (G, PG, R, etc): NC-17/ R
-Link: http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/91100/Denude-Styles-Triplets-AU/
-Genre(s): Drama, Tragedy, Teen