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Pretty Girls

Form:
-Title: Pretty Girls
-Author: exiiliious
-Number of chapters: 25
-Band (One Direction or 5SOS): 5SOS
-Content rating (G, PG, R, etc): R
-Link:Pretty Girls
-Genre(s): Drama, romance

Title: Pretty Girls
Author: exiiliious
Book Link: Pretty Girls
Review: It was written well - just the typical mistakes that caused me to reread the paragraph. But otherwise, it's a good story and you're a good writer (:
My Opinion: It's a good start- keep it going!
Rating: 6/10
Story Grammar: There were typical English errors
So you said, as an example: “Sweetie,” mom sighed. “What if this girl is dangerous?”
What it should say is this: “Sweetie,” mom sighed, “what if this girl is dangerous?”
Story Flow: The story flow was smooth and sweet
Tips: Just watch out for the simple grammar errors! If you want, I can always edit them for you (:
Recommendation: 7/10

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Hey, love! Are you still doing these reviews?

twoghosts
8/19/18

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Author: Prinny1321
Number of Chapters: 4 (currently)
Band: One Direction and 5SOS
Content Rating: NC17
Link: http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/90916/Fallen-Angel/
Genres: Romance, Adventure and Fantasy

Prinny1321
8/17/18

Title: Only You
Author: Prinny1321
Number of Chapters: 56 (currently)
Band: One Direction (Harry focused)
Content Rating: NC17
Link: http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/90226/Only-You/
Genres: Romance, Comedy and Drama

Prinny1321
8/17/18

-Title: // Denude //
-Author: PerciaxXXx
-Number of chapters: 5 (currently)
-Band (One Direction or 5SOS): Harry Styles
-Content rating (G, PG, R, etc): NC-17/ R
-Link: http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/91100/Denude-Styles-Triplets-AU/
-Genre(s): Drama, Tragedy, Teen