Form:
-Title: The Arranged Wedding
-Author: JasperRenee
-Number of chapters: Twenty-Two
-Band: One Direction
-Content rating: NC-17
-Link: The Arranged Wedding
-Genre(s): Romance, Drama, Tragedy

Title: The Arranged Wedding
Author: JasperRenee
Book Link: The Arranged Wedding
Review: OKAY SIDE NOTE
I'M ONLY ON CHAPTER 2 AND I'M ADDICTED SO WHAT IN THE ACTUAL HELL

OKAY NO
I FUCKING REFUSE
CHAPTER 9 FUCKING KILLED ME
ONLY ANNABETH MATTERS
I'VE NEVER WANTED TO HARM A LITTLE CHILD MORE

UM WHAT?!
ARE YOU FUCKING-

okay I can't spoil it for everyone.

I FUCKING DESPISE YOU GPIANIUFHU

I LITERALLY JUST SLAMMED MY HEAD ON MY KEYBOARD

UM OKAY WHAT?!?!?

I HATE YOU

SO

FUCKING

MUCH

MY HEART HURTS

I HAVE NEVER SOBBED OVER A FANFICTION

.............

I needed to calm down. I grabbed a drink and now I am sitting on my bed, debating my life. Why do I do this to myself? WhY DiD yOu Do ThAt To Me?!?

Okay so the last story I ever got attached to was called "Liam's Sex Slave" (quite a great read if I do say so myself) but NEVER like this and NEVER in such a short amount of chapters.

I'm literally in love with this.

AND IT IS ENDED LIKE WHY THE FUCCKKKKKKKK

My heart is heavy.

I became so attached like I'm FUCKING SOBBING

I HAVE BEEN WRITING FOR YEARS AND ALL MY VOCAB IS SAYING TO ME IS "FUCOSWACIBSUYVCGSCUHSBCUYBUDBUWDUDGUDCU"



As Romeo said, "Eyes, look your last!
Arms, take your last embrace! and, lips, O you
The doors of breath, seal with a righteous kiss
A dateless bargain to engrossing death!
Come, bitter conduct, come, unsavoury guide!
Thou desperate pilot, now at once run on
The dashing rocks thy sea-sick weary bark!
Here's to my love! (drinks)
O true apothecary!
They drugs are quick. Thus with a kiss I die."
My Opinion: AND NOW I WANT TO FUCKING DIE

UM FUCK YOU SO MUCH OHHHHH MY FUCK

I HAVE NEVER CURSED SO MUCH IN ONE CHAPTER

UM I LOVE THIS SO MUCH LIKE GO READ THIS NOW GO GO GO GO GO GO
Rating: 10/10
Story Grammar: Incorrect words here and there
You're** was really the only thing that got me in the feel bads
Story Flow: So fucking perfectly laid out like JAG JÄVLAR HATAR DIG SÅ MYCKET

(translation: I FUCKING HATE YOU SO MUCH)

YOU ARE TURNING ME BACK INTO MY SWEDISH SELF SICFIWUFHWIFHIQSDHUIW

TEACH ME YOUR WISDOM
Tips: Um just maybe DON'T completely shatter my heart? Yeah? Maybe? Thanks

Really the only fault you seem to have in this story are the simple you're vs your mistakes. That was my yearbook quote, btw, it was just "you're*". Pathetic, I know.

BUT FUCK I LOVE IT I AM DOING 'Alcoholics Anonymous' NOW
Recommendation: UM OF COURSE IT’S A FUCKING 10/10

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