You Wanna Know?

Okay, here it is. Your story You are my best friend is pretty good. I am sure basically everyone is aware of this by now but I am not really a Harry fan so this story was leaning towards my bad side from the beginning. But, putting that aside, it is good. I like how you have relationships in your story that did actually happen like Harry/Taylor and Taylor/Calvin.

I also like the fact that you incorporated real facts about the celebrities in your story. It is the kind of story that makes you go “awwww” because Skyler and Harry are so cute. The personalities of the characters really show through the way they talk and not just that but they are also very life like. The only thing I would criticise is that there isn’t much drama. And if there is drama it is small and predictable.

There aren’t really any big twists or turns in the plot. That kind of made it a bit boring. Ignoring the fact that I don’t like Harry, even if this was a Louis/Liam or even Niall fanfic I still don’t think I would read it. I would definitely recommend it to a friend but I cannot guarantee that they would like it either.

But, there is still hope as there is an easy way to fix this. Just add more drama, more excitement. For example, in one of your last chapters Harry talked about Megan and how he had something with her but Skyler isn’t allowed to know. That is good because now I really wanna know what it is.

Talk about it in the next few chapters but don’t let Harry reveal it for a few. Maybe Skyler could get curious and ask Liam and Liam tells her and Skyler gets angry (or sad) and Harry finds out that she asked Liam and they get into a huge fight? That would be dramatic and great. And if you ever need any ideas for your story, don’t be afraid if ask love.
~Sophalicious

DEAR ALL PEOPLE
You are my best friend is a pretty good story. I rate it 6+1/2 - 10. You should check it out as well as all the stories that i have reviewed in You Wanna Know? They have so far all been pretty good. I am impressed because i thought i was going to get shitty dumb stories but the quality of these stories has been really good. You definitely should go have a look at them.

Notes

Right, new chapter.
Just so you guys know, every single story that i have reviewed has been sent onto my friends so if you have had a sudden amount of votes on your story go up then say thanks to them!
Love you all!