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Loved it

Great story!

It has so much drama. Don't you just love it when you get so into a story that you actually forget that you are supposed to be reviewing it?

SPOILER ALERT
"You're nothing but a fat, lazy cow" Ashton taunted

"Stop eating so much. You're gonna grow up to be obese. Don't count on me coming to your funeral fat ass" joined in Calum

Fatty, fatty, fatty.

Stop being a fatty Ashlee!

I felt soooo much sympathy for Ashlee. Please don't let her die.

Loved your style, loved the deeper meanings, there was a hell of a lot of emotions and character development in your story and empathy with the characters. The characters actually felt real.

I also liked how each character has a completely different personality and you make sure that their personalities show with how they act and talk.

Some of it didn't make sense though.

2ND SPOILER ALERT
I ran as fast as i could, away from Luke and his assholes.

I got into my car

Anyway, please keep updating this story and i will continue to read what you write (new subscriber alert)

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