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Okay, here is the shit. I have said countless times that I am not a Harry fan but with this story I actually think he is really cute and sweet. Except for the fact that he is always crying. I get that he is sad, I would be too but he is such a cry baby.

I love the storyline. I have never read a story like it on this website before. You have written it really well, it is so dramatic. It actually made me cry. It is just so sad that Bella can’t remember. Plus, since this is a real life thing that actually happens many people can relate to it which is great.

Just pointing something out. It’s Oh my gosh not Ohmygosh. There are spaces in between each word. Every time you wrote “Ohmygosh” I kind of cringed.

I find Bella kind of annoying. The way she approaches everything and constantly asks questions like a child does. I get that she doesn’t remember but it kind of irritated me a little bit because she was asking questions about obvious things.

It Is soooo frustrating when she accidentally says something from her past and doesn’t even realise it like “Haz”. She just carries on like nothing happened and it’s so frustrating. I don’t get why the lads and Harry won’t just tell Bella that her dad is dead. Yes, it will make her sad but she needs to know.

I hate when Harry starts questioning things like his relationship with Bella. When Harry says “I love Bella. And Bella used to love me. Maybe she still does, but I don’t know if I can go through waiting for her to find out” I was literally shouting “NO! STAY WITH HER! WAIT FOR HER” at my screen.

Overall, I think you are a really good writer and you put a lot of emotion into your story. Some of the characters personality traits annoy me a little but I guess that’s what makes the story unique. Keep updating. You haven’t written much so once you write more it will be more clear as to where the story is headed.
~Sophalicious

DEAR ALL PEOPLE
This is a very sad story. If you get emotional easily i don't recommend this story or you will be lying in your bed crying like a baby. I give this story 7/10. You should check it out!

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~Sophalicious