Story Reviews

Firstly let me give you my overall rating : 8/10

I think I like this story better than the last one of yours I reviewed, its structured better and kind of easier to read, the plot is better and the style is too.

The thing I dont like so much is the constant switching of POVS, it gets kind of confusing for me trying to remember whats going on with Hayden etc. so I had to read some parts again, I think its a case of too many characters having a main role and being crammed into one chapter :) I still liked it though for these reasons:

The characters were likeable (when they were meant to be)
It was an easy read
The storyline is used ALOT but I still read something new
I liked your style in this story alot better but sometimes the styles for each character were too similar

Overall I did like it though and i would recommend it for others to read, it was enjoyable and I did read it all in one day :D

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