Story Reviews
Love is an Act of War Review
Loved it! 8/10
Right, there are many good things about this story
1) Strong characters- All the characters are strong, their thoughts are strong and their feeling are expressed really well
2) The Main Character- Adria is a really good main character, if I hadn't liked her I wouldn't want to carry on reading
3) Original story with an overused storyline- I know that doesn't make sense at all but what I mean is a lot of people use the same storyline conflict,forbidden love, gangs etc. but don't write it in an original way just the same stuff
4) Nice Romance- I like the whole Adria and Calum relationship, its really cute and they don't seem as cliche as I sometimes read
There aren't many complaints I have if I'm honest, I like your writing style a lot you can really read this story with ease and I cant wait to see what you write next!
Can you do one for my story "The Arranged Wedding"? Thanks love!!!
2/5/17