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Everything I Didn't Say
Grade: 5.5
Strong Points:
-I liked how the chapters were written. For some reason it really made me want to keep reading and I read five chapters without even realizing it! I feel if you had an original plot that was intriguing I could never stop reading your work.
Things to Work On:
-The summary could be improved a bit. I don't like how you put "Read my story to find out..." at the end. You shouldn't really address the reader unless you're writing a 2nd point of view story.
-The plot isn't very original. There are a lot of stories that have a similar plot. Continue with the story but for your next one come up with something really original so people will want to read it because it is so unique! :)
**SPOILER ALERT**
-I didn't like the cliche character-goes-to-a-club-and-cheats-on-girl thing you did. Everyone does it and I wish you would've done something different to add some obstacles to their relationship.
**SPOILER OVER**
Would I recommend this story to someone else? Not this story. But I love your writing style so if you had an original plot then yeah :)
Everything I Didn't Say
Grade: 5.5
Strong Points:
-I liked how the chapters were written. For some reason it really made me want to keep reading and I read five chapters without even realizing it! I feel if you had an original plot that was intriguing I could never stop reading your work.
Things to Work On:
-The summary could be improved a bit. I don't like how you put "Read my story to find out..." at the end. You shouldn't really address the reader unless you're writing a 2nd point of view story.
-The plot isn't very original. There are a lot of stories that have a similar plot. Continue with the story but for your next one come up with something really original so people will want to read it because it is so unique! :)
**SPOILER ALERT**
-I didn't like the cliche character-goes-to-a-club-and-cheats-on-girl thing you did. Everyone does it and I wish you would've done something different to add some obstacles to their relationship.
**SPOILER OVER**
Would I recommend this story to someone else? Not this story. But I love your writing style so if you had an original plot then yeah :)
Notes
Hope you're satisfied!
check out my new fanfiction? thanks :p
slow hands by dainey
6/24/17