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The Princess, The Straight-A Student, The Gang, And The Blue Hills At Sunset

CONTEST!

Hey guys! I'm sorry that this wasn't information for the sequel to this story, but I am having a contest for my story Dog-Walkers! If you go to that story go to chapter 10 or 11 and everything will be explained about the rules and winners and stuff. So message me or comment in my Dog-Walkers story about what it says. Hope you guys enjoy and I promise I WILL update this story for the sequel information. I'll see y'all later!
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Please keep on writing your story because it's really good

Nutellaisbae
12/18/15

@Call_Me_Godot
Thank you for the tips I will definitely take them into consideration. BTW I was up late last night writing this so not all of it came out exactly how I wanted it to. So again thank you for the tips.
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IHeartBrittNicole236
11/17/15

I think throwing French in there is really cool but Sylvie and Olivia's conversation is a bit formal. Instead of bonjour or au revoir, you could've gone with salut. And typically using vous verbs is something you do respectfully, like talking to adults or someone who holds more authority over you or when you're speaking to a stranger. Parlez-vous francais was the right thing to ask Louis as Oliva doesn't know him personally but she'd ask Sylvie parles francais?

Its just like you'd ask a stranger hello how are you but you'd ask your best friend hey what's up. :P