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The Princess, The Straight-A Student, The Gang, And The Blue Hills At Sunset

Summary

~Book one in The Blue Hills series~




Meet Olivia. She has never missed a single day of school. She always gets straight A's on her homework. She's proud of it, yes. You think her life is perfect, right? Wrong! Even though she is the schools' best student, she gets overwhelmed a lot, she's even had an anxiety attack once. Now meet Eleanor. Just like Olivia, She has never missed a day of school. She is the popular girl, the schools' number one fashonista, and doesn't care about anyone but herself. Now meet the One Direction gang. When you see them walking down the hallway, you better run out of the way. One thing everybody knows about them is that; when you see One Direction, run the other direction. Right when Olivia and Eleanor think things are going alright, they get kidnapped! Will they ever get away? Will they ever get passed their rivalry? Read to find out!


Characters

Eleanor Carson

Eleanor Carson

17 years old. Fashonista. Spoiled rich thanks to her parents.

Grace Thomas

Grace Thomas

38 years old. Olivia's mom. Full-time lawyer.

Harry Styles

Harry Styles

17 years old. 1/5 of One Direction. If you stare into his eyes long enough, they can pierce into your soul and read you thoughts.

Liam Payne

Liam Payne

18 years old. 1/5 of One Direction. When you see him, do NOT make eye-contact with him.

Louis Tomlinson

Louis Tomlinson

19 years old. Will push you down if you get in his way. And its best if 90% of the time you DON'T talk to him.

Niall Horan

Niall Horan

18 years old. let's just say that you don't want to get on his bad side.

Olivia Thomas

Olivia Thomas

18 years old. Straight-A student and often gets overwhelmed. Her parents work a lot so she doesn't get to see them much.

Sylvie Cameron

Sylvie Cameron

17 years old. Olivia's best friend since pre-school. French is her second language. Shy at first but then super nice.

Zayn Malik

Zayn Malik

Leader of One Direction. If you see him coming, move WAY out of the way.

Chapters

Comments

Please keep on writing your story because it's really good

Nutellaisbae Nutellaisbae
12/18/15

@Call_Me_Godot
Thank you for the tips I will definitely take them into consideration. BTW I was up late last night writing this so not all of it came out exactly how I wanted it to. So again thank you for the tips.
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IHeartBrittNicole236 IHeartBrittNicole236
11/17/15

I think throwing French in there is really cool but Sylvie and Olivia's conversation is a bit formal. Instead of bonjour or au revoir, you could've gone with salut. And typically using vous verbs is something you do respectfully, like talking to adults or someone who holds more authority over you or when you're speaking to a stranger. Parlez-vous francais was the right thing to ask Louis as Oliva doesn't know him personally but she'd ask Sylvie parles francais?

Its just like you'd ask a stranger hello how are you but you'd ask your best friend hey what's up. :P

Where is Call_Me_Godot? Where is Call_Me_Godot?
11/16/15
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