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The Princess, The Straight-A Student, The Gang, And The Blue Hills At Sunset

Chapter 12: Author's Note

THE END!!

I know what you're all thinking. "WHAT?! THE END?! IT CAN'T BE THE END!" But the end is just the beginning. I know that's a movie reference, but hey, it's catchy, is it not? The next update for this book will say when I'm releasing the sequel. So stay tuned! I hope you guys have enjoyed this book! I hope you all have a good day slash night or afternoon it just depends on where you live. I have one request for you guys. Go on youtube and type in ''God's not dead by the newsboys'' and click on the one that says it's by NewsboysVEVO. It's an uplifting song that I love to hear. My favorite one by them is called We Believe. I hope you guys enjoy them as much as I do! Lots of Love, IHeartBrittNicole236. Stay tuned for when I'll be releasing my next book!

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Comments

Please keep on writing your story because it's really good

Nutellaisbae Nutellaisbae
12/18/15

@Call_Me_Godot
Thank you for the tips I will definitely take them into consideration. BTW I was up late last night writing this so not all of it came out exactly how I wanted it to. So again thank you for the tips.
-IHeartBrittNicole236-

I think throwing French in there is really cool but Sylvie and Olivia's conversation is a bit formal. Instead of bonjour or au revoir, you could've gone with salut. And typically using vous verbs is something you do respectfully, like talking to adults or someone who holds more authority over you or when you're speaking to a stranger. Parlez-vous francais was the right thing to ask Louis as Oliva doesn't know him personally but she'd ask Sylvie parles francais?

Its just like you'd ask a stranger hello how are you but you'd ask your best friend hey what's up. :P