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The Princess, The Straight-A Student, The Gang, And The Blue Hills At Sunset

Chapter 11: Oh no. Really?

Olivia's P.O.V.

The last thing I remembered was Zayn carrying me to the van and then I blacked out. When I woke up, there was a bright light. It wasn't white, but rather yellow. It wasn't blinding like the sun, but calming. I heard a voice calling me, saying that I needed to help with something. It was for Zayn's vision. I knew what I needed to say. And then I saw a familiar person.

"Zayn, everything will be alright." I said. He turned around.

"Olivia? I thought you were in a coma." He said.

"I am. This is a vision. You have to trust God, Zayn. Everything will be alright." I said, beginning to fade.

"Olivia! Please come back!" He pleaded.

"Trust God!" I said. Then I was gone. Back in the hospital, not able to move an inch until Zayn asked me to forgive him.

"I forgive you, Zayn." I said, fluttering my eyes open.

"Olivia," He exclaimed, hugging me tight. I hugged him.

"I missed you." He whispered.

"I'm glad." I said, smiling.

Everyone else came in the room. "What's going- Olivia!" They exclaimed, hugging me tightly. Especialy Ellie, Sylvie and Liam.

"Uh. . . guys,. . . can't. . . breathe." I said, not able to breath.

"Oh, sorry." They said in unison.

"It's alright. Can we get the heck out of here?" I asked.

30 minutes later. . .

Oh. my. goodness. I can't believe how annoying these boys are. One minute your being hugged by all of them, the next minute they're putting handcuffs and a blindfold on you. I really shouldn't complain, though. It's not like they're going to kidnap me again. They didn't gag me or put the cuffs on tight.

"Where are we going?" I asked.

"You'll see, Liv." Liam said, holding me tightly on his lap again.

1 Hour Later. . .

Liam pulled me out of the van, gently, and walked me a ways. It seemed familiar, but I couldn't place it. It was driving me crazy. Liam stopped walking and so did I. He took the blindfold off me. I saw something that I hadn't seen in a very long time. Three years, to be exact. I was looking at the blue hills for the first time in three years.

I looked at Liam and back at the Blue Hills. They were so beautiful. I was absolutely astonished. I looked at Zayn and thanked him. I looked back at Liam. He was down on one knee with a small box in his hands. Oh no. Really?

Notes

Cliffhanger! So one thing. Do you believe in God?
-IHeartBrittNicole236-

Comments

Please keep on writing your story because it's really good

Nutellaisbae Nutellaisbae
12/18/15

@Call_Me_Godot
Thank you for the tips I will definitely take them into consideration. BTW I was up late last night writing this so not all of it came out exactly how I wanted it to. So again thank you for the tips.
-IHeartBrittNicole236-

I think throwing French in there is really cool but Sylvie and Olivia's conversation is a bit formal. Instead of bonjour or au revoir, you could've gone with salut. And typically using vous verbs is something you do respectfully, like talking to adults or someone who holds more authority over you or when you're speaking to a stranger. Parlez-vous francais was the right thing to ask Louis as Oliva doesn't know him personally but she'd ask Sylvie parles francais?

Its just like you'd ask a stranger hello how are you but you'd ask your best friend hey what's up. :P