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Ready Or Not

Louis = Guilty

Kinely's POV I sat in the passenger's seat of Louis's car. We were going to the fair, except Louis was going like 10 mph. "Louis!" I whined, "Hurry the crap up!" "I'm going as fast as I can, love," He replied. I looked over at the speedometer. It read 20 mph. The limit was 30 mph. "You are going 20 mph for gosh sake!" I cried. Louis mutteree something under his breath but sped up. We arrived at the fair 4 minutes later. Louis parked and got out. He opened my door for me. I got out and smiled. He closed the door and locked the car. I skipped over to him and linked my arm through his. We skipped to the entrance together. Probably lookiny like a couple of idiots. Louis walked up to the ticket booth. The girl running the booth smiled and batted her eyelashes at him. I felt a twinge of jealousy. I walked up to Louis and planted a kiss on his cheek. "You ready to go, love?" I asked, smiling sweetly at the ticket girl. She glared at me. Louis smiled. "Yup! Let's go!" He said. We walked in through the metal gates. Louis handed me my ride pass. I slipped it in my pocket. "Lets get cotton candy!" Louis said suddenly. I smiled. "Yes!" I cheered. We raced over to the cotton candy booth. Louis paid for two large bags of cotton candy. I opened mine up and grabbed a handful. I shoved it into my mouth. "I think fairs always being out youe inner kid, yea?" Louis asked. "Totally! I used to go to them all the time as a kid." I replied, mouth full. Louis laughed and took a piece of my cotton candy. He shoved it into his mouth, and I took some of his. It turned into a cotton candy war. I started giggling. I had never had so much fun on a date, not even with Harry. Louis just was like a kid, a very attractive kid, might I add. I slung an arm around Louis's shoulder. I planted a kiss on his cheek. Louis smiled but then his eyes widened. I looked behind me to see... Eleanor's POV "C'mon, Danielle!" I yelled. Danielle came running down the stairs. I smiled and grabbed my keys. Danielle, Perrie, and I were all going to the fair. It was going to be girls night. Louis had something to do with the boys. He had been acting weird all week. I ushered Perrie and Danielle out the door. We got into my car and we drove off. 10 minutes later we pulled into the parking lot. I got out and we walked up to the ticket booth. I bought three ride passes. We skipped into the fair. Perrie and Danielle went to go ride the faris wheel. I decided to go get some cotton candy. I headed to the cotton candy stand. I was humming Live While We're Young. I stopped abruptly when I saw a very familiar face- Louis. And the was a girl with her arm slung around his shoulders and she was kissing his cheek. He was smiling and obviously not stopping it. His eyes widened when he saw me. The pretty red head turned her head to follow his gaze. I stormed over to him. "What the heck, Louis?!" I yelled in his face. Louis flinched. The red head looked quite confused. Then recognition came, and it showed. She smiled, she fricking smiled at me! "Hello, I'm Kinely. I am guessing your Eleanor. Louis's ex?" She smiled sweetly. I looked at her in shock. Ex? What the frick? "I'm sorry, love. But I am his girlfriend." I smirked. Louis shifted uncomfortably. The red head, who I learned was Kinely, looked at Louis with anger burning in her eyes. "What the frick, Louis?! You said you broke up! I cant gelieve you lied to me! And cheated on Eleanor!" Kinely yelled at him. Louis winced. "I'm sorry, Kinely. I just wanted one date. Cuz I really like you." Louis said. She scowled and slapped him hard across the face. "Louis, if you really liked either of us, you never would have done this." I said softly. He looked at me, hurt in his eyes. I walked up to him and slapped across the face. I walked over to the red head, Kinely. I put an arm around her shoulder. "I dont blame you, love." I whispered. She looked at me in surprise. "Really?" Kinely asked. "Really. I am actually embarassed to have even been Louis's girlfriend. People just dont go and do that," I said, "I'm here with Perrie and Danielle. Would you like to hang out with us? Lets forget Louis together, shall we?" Kinely nodded. And we walked off together. Louis's POV I stood there, watching the two girls walk off togethet giggling. Eleanor's words still rang in my head. 'I'm embarassed to even have been his girlfriend!' and 'Let's forget Louis together, shall we?' What the frick just happened?

Notes

Sorry I havent updated! I hope you like this chapter! Please give me a good rating! I have a 8.5! It used to be a 9.9! Dont forget I do shout outs! Send me a message! I'd like to dedicate this story to someone. If u want it to be to you, send me a message telling me about yourself and one direction. You dont have to tell me your real name. Story inspired by Bridget Mendler's song 'Ready Or Not'

Comments

Awwww this was a cute story!! <3 I love it!(:
OfficiallyBreee OfficiallyBreee
7/16/13
@Karina Tomlinson Thnx! I dont really like writing explict scenes tho...kinda awko taco. ;) I will try to update tomorrow...I am busy today. Sorry! :|
Hazza_Fan Hazza_Fan
7/15/13
Luv this chapter , hope that u can update soooon >
Erm, Clydehurst Christian Ranch. I am back now and am looking for a co author
Hazza_Fan Hazza_Fan
7/10/13
What camp??