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MadHouse

More Than This.

LINAS POV.
I finished putting on my makeup with my outfit. I decided I was gonna go natural with my hair so I let it air dry. I went over to my closet and put on my white KEDS sneakers. Since my shirt has triangles out it I decided to put on my favorite set of triangle jewelry. I stood in front of my full body mirror. I guess I looked okay. I kept staring at my ugly body. Why do guys even like me? I don’t understand. I’m not skinny and I’m not pretty like most girls. I’m just a regular girl who dreams about it. I was snapped out of my trance by someone knocking on my door. “Lina, you in here?” I looked back in the mirror before sighing to myself. “Yea, I’m in here…” I stayed put in front of the mirror still looking. The door opened and in came Zayn. Out of all people, it had to be Zayn.


“Hey you almost ready to go?” I didn’t answer him, just continue looking in my mirror at this pathetic excuse of an image. “Lina? You okay?” I looked at him and plastered a smile on my face even though tears started to form in my eyes as I remembered all the horrible names I was called and being hurt just because I wasn’t like every other girl. I guess he saw the tears forming and immediately came to me. “Lina, why are you crying?” The tears started pouring down my face as sobs restlessly came out my mouth. “ Zayn, w-why do y-you even l-like me?”I looked at him through the mirror as I saw he eyes get wide.


“Lina? Why are you asking me this? You know I like everything about you.” For some reason I couldn’t believe him. “No, no you don’t. You’re just like the rest of the guys that said that. They played me. They said they liked me but left me for some girls who are way better looking and fit then me. You don’t like me Zayn, you never will.” My eyes met his in the mirror. I saw how devastated and heartbroken he was. I was about to speak again when he said something. “Lina, your right. I don’t like everything about you.” That’s when my heart shattered to a million pieces. I can’t believe he would say that. How could he? I was about to go all out full of rage when he continued. He stepped in front of me. “I don’t like everything about you, I LOVE everything about you.” I immediately stopped crying.


“Your eyes”, wiping away the tears on my face as he said it. “The way your nose crinkles when you laugh”, poking my nose. “Your gorgeous smile, your soft hair, your glowing skin.” Rubbing his soft firm hands on my shoulders. “Your personality. How sweet and funny you are. How great of a person you are. How you always stick up for people around you. How smart you are. How you always share with people. I love that you can hold your liquor down for so long.” I giggled at the memory of all of us in the kitchen playing 21 questions. “I love your tattoos. I love your energy. I love the good vibe you give off. I love the shape of your body.” He snaked his arms around my waist, pulling me into him. “How curvy you are. I love how you make me feel good. I love how we can be ourselves around each other. I love everything about you Lina. I love you. That’s the best part about it."


I felt the tears coming down again. He loved me. He really truly deeply loved me. No boy has ever said that to me before. I pull away from his grasp and turned around. Our faces only inches apart. “I love YOU Lina. I really do.” His hand caressed my cheek and we stared into each other’s eyes. I decided to close the space between us and kissed him. His soft lips on mine, it felt so good. We stayed likes this until we were out of breath. I pulled back to look into his eyes. “I love you too Zayn.” He smiled and pulled me in for another kiss. He pulled away and grabbed my hand. “Lina Nicole Xing, will you be my girlfriend?” I couldn’t resist the huge smile coming across my face. “Yes, Zayn I’ll be your girlfriend. “ He smiled just a big as me before kissing me passionately again. We pulled away and he took my hand in his. “Let’s go downstairs.” I nodded and he walked out together. Zayn Malik was the ONLY boy that made feel loved, and this time I believed it.



TALIA’S POV.

I was still getting ready when I heard a knock on my door. I quickly put my shirt on and went to open the door. “Tori?” She hurriedly pushed past me and came into my room. “Oh, okay then.” I shut the door and went to my closet. “Talia, guess what?” I turn to look at her and she looked quite happy so I guess it was good. “What? Is everything okay?” She shook her head yes so this HAD to be good news. “Youuuu….found those shoes you been looking for?” She looked at me confused before realization came on her face. “OH! I did find those but that’s not it.” I shrugged my shoulders. “What?” She came up and hopped over to me. I was bent over in my closet with my back facing her.“I… had sex….with Niall.”I stopped moving and froze. What? But Tori was virgin, she’d never have sex with anyone unless they were her boyfriend, at least that’s what she told me. I slowly arose and turned around. “You what!?” She vigorously nodded her head and a smiled appeared on my face. “OH MY GOD TORI! THAT’S GREAT! It was great wasn’t it?” She gave me a confused look. “Uh no, it was AMAZING!” I laughed at how happy she was and we both ran over to my bed.


“You have to tell me how it happened!” She nodded and started telling me while I was getting ready. After she told me everything, and I mean like EVERY detail, I was already done with my makeup and hair. “Oh my god! You know what I’m going to ask next toriiiiiiiiii…” She shot her head up and smiled deviously. “Oh man…he was BIG. Not kidding. I think that’s why it hurt so badly.” I laughed at how big her eyes got when she said big. “So what? You guys dating now?” She nodded her head. “I wanna show you how he did it, come here!” She grabbed my hand and dragged me out my room. We ran to her room and she opened the door. She pulled me to her bed and pointed to the wall. “Will you be my girlfriend?” “Yes, I’ll be your girlfriend J” I smiled at how cute that was. “Awww! You guys are so freaking cute!” She blushed and hid her head in her hands. We got up and walked out.


She closed her door and walked down the hallway. Suddenly, Lina’s door opened, revealing her AND Zayn super happy and smiling. Oh god….what happened with those 2? “Hey guys!” Tori said, excitement in her voice. “Hey Tori, hey Talia. What’s up?” I smiled at Lina and continued the convo. “Nothing, Tori was just telling me how Niall asked her out not to long ago.” Doing the air quotation marks while saying “asked her out”. Lina eyes grew wide when she realized what I meant. A smile came to her face and she hugged Tori. “OH MY GOD TORI! HOW WAS IT? IS THAT ONE SPOT COVERED ON THE WALL NOW? WAS IT GENTLE?” I laughed at Lina for bombarding Tori with so much questions. “Haha, it was good, yes that spot is covered now, and it was gentle. Here let me show you were he wrote it!” Her and Lina ran into Tori’s room then disappeared. Zayn looked at me confused. I chuckled at how clueless he was. “Asked her out. Seexxx?” His eyes grew wide and he laughed. “OHHHHH! RIGHT! With who? Niall?” My face literally fell into one of those “are you fucking serious Zayn” looks. “No, Liam. Of course Niall you idiot!” I smacked the back of his head and he playfully shoved me. We chuckled. “So why are you and Lina so happy? You guys do the do too?” She chuckled and shook his head no. “I asked her out and she said yes.” I squealed and hugged him. You don’t know who happy I am for Zayn to be Lina’s boyfriend now. The girl couldn’t get enough of him and neither could he. They both loved each other. I wish me and Lou could be like that. “Arrgghhh shut up Talia, not now!”


I pulled away and he smiled at me. “That’s great!” He nodded and started telling me the whole story. When he finished, Lina and Tori walked out her room. I ran to Lina and hugged her. She giggled and hugged me back. I pulled away, but still staying close enough so I could whisper in her ear. “I’m glad you believed him, he would die if you didn’t.” I patted her back and pulled away. She had a sincere smile on her face. We all headed downstairs. We walked into the living room joking and laughing about how Tori might have sounded while having sex.Everyone looked at us confused. “What are you guys laughing about?” We all looked at Liam. I looked at Tori who had a death glare on her face. “Talia, I swear if you say it, I’ll kill you.” I smile devilishly at her and looked back at everyone else. “Well…. Tori-“I was cut off by Tori covering my mouth.I removed her hand and blocked her from doing it again. “TORI HAD SEX!” I yelled and her face fell to a shock expression. “TALIA!” I laughed and started running around the room with her chasing me. “YOU CAN’T GET ME!” I yelled turning around to see how close she was. We were running around the living room and everyone was laughing, including Louis. “BITCH DON’T EVEN!” I laughed and continued running around. She finally caught up and jumped on me, causing both of us to fall to the ground.


All you heard were giggles and laughs. I tried to fight her off so she wouldn’t hit me but I failed. She grabbed my arm and bit me. “OWWWWWW! WHAT THE HELL!?!” She sat up and got off of me. “WHY DID YOU BIT ME?” Everyone was still laughing but I wasn’t. That shit hurt like hell! “Because you deserved it. You know you did.” I stared at her long and hard but couldn’t help but giggle, her doing the same. “It’s not my fault. You know I would.” She paused, looking into my eyes, then nodding her in agreement that what I said was true. I got up and held my hand out so Tori could get up. She grabbed it and I pulled her up. I walked over to Niall and sat down, resting my legs on his.“So Niall, is she a screamer?” he looked at me wide eyed and everyone busted out laughing. Tori groaned and fell back on the couch. Liam decided to clear the awkward air. “Soooo if everyone ready to go?” We all nodded and got up. Lina and Zayn walked hand in hand, Niall and Tori did the same, Liam had his arm around Penelope shoulder, and Harry and Louis walked with each other. Right now I needed to talk to Azalea.


“Hey girly! You look worried and stressed, is what happening earlier down here bothering you?” We both walked out the house and I closed the door. “Yeah, it really is.” I locked the door and turned around, returning to my spot next to Azalea as we walked to the drive way. “What care are we driving today?” I shrugged my shoulders and called the girls over so we could all choose. I had multiple cars. I had a 2012 Volkswagen Passat, a Mercedes Benz ML63, a 2012 Range Rover, a Black Cayenne, and a 2012 jeep liberty. “Hey guys and girl, what should I drive today?”Lina, Louis, and Penelope said my Mercedes, Zayn and Tori said the cayenne, Harry and Liam said the Volkswagen Passat, and Niall and Azalea said the Range Rover. “Well….. We will drive the Mercedes today!” Lina, Louis, and Penelope cheered. We were about to all walk away to our cars when Harry stopped us all. “Hey! I got an idea! Why don’t we all drive our own cars to the café? It’ll be cool!” We all thought about it and agreed. “You guys can drive my cars if you want?” They all looked at me and smiled. I was smothered in hugs and thank you’d from everyone. Lina and Zayn chose the Passat, Tori and Niall took the Jeep, Harry and Azalea took the cayenne, Liam and Penelope took then range rover, leaving me and Louis to take the Mercedes.


“So we’re going where first?” “We are going to the mall first, then I need to go to IKEA to get some things.” They all nodded and got in the cars. I looked at Louis and smiled. I walked to the driver side when Louis stopped me. “No no no nooooooo! You are NOT driving!” I laughed and shook my head. “Fine Louis! Here, catch.” I tossed him the keys and he caught them with one hand. I swear he could catch anything. I got in on the passenger side and he got in the driver side. He started the car and everyone else decided to follow us. I told Louis were to go even though he knew ere it was. We finally made it too one of London’s most famous malls, Westfield London Shopping Centre, home to London’s most amazing shops. We got out and waited for the others to come. “Okay so we all separate and meet back at the front in 2 hours?” The all nodded and we separated, girls went to the left and boys went to the right. We decided to go into Calvin Klein Jeans. After going there, we almost been to every store : Adidas, American Apparel, Burberry, Coach, Cos, Dior, Gap, Gucci, H&M, Hollister, Lee, Levi’s, Louis Vuitton, Nike, Oasis, Phase Eight, Prada, UGG Australia, Urban Outfitters, Warehouse, and Zara. We walked by one of the stores the boys were in so we decided to seen them. “Hey guys!” They turned around and saw us with all these bags, their eyes wide. “A little help here?” They came back to earth and hurriedly came towards us. They took some of our bags and laughed at how tired we were. “God, my back hurts!” I flopped down on one of the couches in the store and sunk down.


They chuckled and some of the girls sat down with me. “HEY LOOK! IT’S THE VIXENS! OH MY GOD!” I heard a couple of hit pitched voices and I swear I was too tired to deal with fans but I put on a smile and looked to my right. They started coming towards us and we got up. “Look its one direction too!” I laughed and looked back at the boys who laughed also. I nodded my head in the direction the crowd was starting to form and they made their way over, putting the bags over where I was recently sitting. I stayed near the bags so one would steal them.I started taking pictures with fans and they wanted some of us and the boys together so we took a big group picture. One fan wanted one of me and Louis together and so we did. The next question the girl asked shattered my heart. “Talia, are you and Louis dating!?” We both looked at each other and back at the fan. I tried to plaster a smile on my face, wanting to say yes to that question so bad but couldn’t because it wasn’t true. “Uh...noo.” I saw the disappointment in her face, probably what I looked like right now. I glanced at Lou who looked just like the girl, disappointment on his face.I had to shrug off the feelings and continued to talk and sign autographs with the fans. 30 minutes later we were all tired. “Bye guys! It was nice meeting you all! Love you!” We said our goodbyes to the fans and took our bags and left. We headed back out to the car, separating our bags so we didn’t have to do it when we got back home. I got in the car with Louis and there was nothing but silence. I decided to clear it. I cleared my throat and looked out the window. “So how about those fans, huh?” I heard him chuckle and I looked at him. “Talia I know you’re bothered by the question that one girl asked us back there, its okay I understand.” No it’s not okay. I WANTED to say yes but he didn’t know it. “I...I... never mind...” He looked at me with a confused face. “Never mind what?” I shook my head and continued to look out the window. “It’s nothing Louis, I promise.” He sighed and looked away, focusing on the road. We were following Harry and Azalea to the restaurant so we could eat cause all that shopping, I know we ALL starving.


We made it to the restaurant and parked. Louis shut of the car and we both sat there. I didn’t look at him and he didn’t look at me. I felt like I did something wrong to make him mad. Should I have told him, or not? I don’t know. I’m so confused right now. “Talia, am I missing something?” I looked at him, his eyes glued to the steering wheel. “Uhhh. No, why would you say that?” He shook his head and looked up at me. “Your acting weird, did I do something wrong?” My eyes went big as I looked at him. I wanted to tell him I loved him, that I needed him, and that I wanted him. “You? Make me mad? Ahah that’s funny! You could never make me mad. I’m not made, see?” I planted a big grin on my face which made him laugh. Oh his laugh. We both got out the car made our way to the group. “Hey, what took you guys so long to get out?” I smacked Harry in the back of the head, earning giggles from everyone. “Oww!” I smiled. “Don’t rush us.” He stuck his tongue out at me and I did the same. We walked in and the lighting was dark so it made it easy for fans not to see us or the boys. The waitresses recognized who we were and took us to a big table way in the back so people wouldn’t harass us. Honestly, I LOVE my fans. They are the reason I made it this far and why I’m still going strong.


We all sat down, boy girl style, and started ordering. “What are we getting for appetizers?” We all looked down at the menu and decided on 2 things. I decided to go with mine first. “Well me and the girls always get the same appetizer when we come here so you guys can share one and the girls share ours.” They nodded and the waitress came back. “Hey guys! I’m Alice and I’ll be your waitress for today. Are you guys ready to order?” We all nodded and gave her our orders. She nodded and left. I pulled out my phone and decided to check my Tumblr. I was replying to one of my fans when I felt a tap on my shoulder. I turned around to see a boy. He looked around my age. Blonde hair and blue eyes. Very attractive. “Hey, I’m a huge fan of you!” I smiled and shook his hand. “Awhh you’re so sweet!” He chuckled and suddenly that cute attitude he had turned into a flirtatious annoyance. “You’re like so hot and sexy.” I felt my cheeks getting a light shade of red and I decided to play nice with him. “Well…um…thanks…” His smirk grew and on my right I could feel Louis getting angry. Oh god, I needed to get rid of this kid before things get out of hand. “Do you want an autograph or picture?” He leaned down to my ear whispered something to me that he soon regretted. “I much rather fuck you senseless.” I smirk to myself and looked down at my phone. Azalea was sitting on my left and she knew the plan when I looked at her. He pulled away and had a devilish smirk on his face. I decided to say it out loud. “Sorry but I’m all about those vaginas dude.” His smirk was wiped off his face as Azalea grabbed my hand and we put our hands on the table so he could see. He slowly backed away and walked off. We both laughed and turned back around. Everyone was looking at us like we were crazy except Louis. I decided to let them know why I said that. “Okay so obviously I’m not a lesbian, I say things like that to get bastards like him away from me and if that doesn’t work, I say I have AIDS. It ALWAYS works.” They all nodded their heads and continued talking in their small groups. I still felt Louis anger forming inside of him. I grabbed his hand under the table and squeezed it. He relaxed immediately and was calm. I looked at him and he looked at me. I mouthed “I’m okay Lou.” He nodded his head in reassurance and that’s when the food came. We all ate and had a good time. This has to be one of the best days of my life. Especially knowing I could calm Louis down just by touching him. We shared something more and I knew, I just knew, he was the one.

Notes

GUYS GUYS GUYS GUYS I MISS YOU SO MUCH!
I had a very good weekend so that's why I haven't been posting but I want to keep you guys happy so here is another one! Now this one is the ALL-TIME favorite chapter I've ever written in this story! I hope you guys like it! 2 couples down, 3 to go. I want to Have Louis and Talia go last so it will be VERY awesome and cute.

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http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=94155049 (Talia's Outfit)
http://www.polyvore.com/sharrrkkkk/set?id=83206628 (Tori's Outfit)http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=89059220 ( Penelope's Outfit)
http://www.polyvore.com/triangles/set?id=85571293 ( Lina's Outfit)
http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=78151384 (Azalea's Outfit)

Comments

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JJ Styles JJ Styles
9/1/14

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6/16/14

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6/16/14

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6/7/14

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