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@theodoramae.
Yeah I totally agree with you I did forget to place harry's POV at the top.. and I do know there was a spacing issue so I'm fixing them now :) ...
But anyway thank you so much for commenting :* XX
I think you've got a nice plot happening and potential for this story to expand really well. Just tow things. 1) Pop the POV of the character's overview at the top of the chapter so we know who to have in mind whilst reading. Although I had an inkling it was Harry - you don't get to his name until about half way down the page and it made things a little confusing and 2) That large, huge chunk of text should be broken up a little to make it easier on the eyes. The first half was absolutely perfect and then it become a little bit difficult x
@The real deal
I'd say yes but I shouldn't :P It would be revealed in a couple of chapters though XX
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