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as the door slams shut im frozen, no moves come out of me, no sounds. i just stand there in utter and complete shock. where was he shot is he alive? is he ok? why would he just shoot him? i come back to reality and turn to him and hes smiling. fucking smiling. "three down three to go." he says. i muster all of the strength i have left in me and punch him square in the nose and he stumbles back letting go of my arm and i take off running. i have no idea where it is im going i need to find a way out of here to find them to see if hes ok. i run to the hall i know the kitchen is in and turn into the pantry. i know zayn had grabbed a weapon so my idea is to take the one he had. i get into the pantry and my eyes go wide. his body is gone. gone. nowhere in here. the only evidence is the blood. "what the fuck" i whisper. im panicking now having no idea what the hell is going on now.

i run and grab the weapon i had hidden earlier in an old pot and put it in my pants and run to the stairwell and head up to the roof so i can see if they are still out front. i have no idea what time it is its pitch dark. i get to the roof and run and look over the edge. i walk along the edge until i can find where the front is. i know they had their lights so i would be able to see them unless they turned them off. i find the front but noone is there. just as im about to turn around im met with a hard blow to the back of my head. and darkness comes. when i come to im in the basement in the room they had liam. i can hear people talking but cant quite make out what they are saying. the door opens and the girl from earlier comes in india. "well look whos finally come to. its good to see you again" she says. "what do you want?" i ask through my teeth. "well since adam let your friends go like an idiot we only have you. so it should be easy."

"hello there cadyn." i look up to see adam walking in along with lilly. "we can either make this easy or hard." he says kneeling in front of me. lilly walks over and hands him a knife. he takes the knife and puts it against my leg and slices. i wince from the pain but am determined not to give them the reaction they want. as if on cue from my lack of reaction india struts over and hits me in the face. "you can do better than that." she says. adam puts the knife against my arm and slices harder and slower than the one on my leg. i let out a scream knowing this one is deeper than the other. "much better" india says. lilly lights a cigarette and starts smoking. "god i love torturing someone." she says laughing walking over to me and putting her lit cigarette on my arm letting it sizzle. she removes it and does it again. i cant help but scream at the pain of it. "STOOOOOP" i yell. just as shes about to do it again the door flies open and louis and liam tackle adam and lilly. i look up and see harry running in and grab india."harry!!" i yell. hes alive. i see liam snap adams neck in an instant and louis grab the gun and fire at lilly hitting her in the chest, i see harry struggle with india and grab the knife off the floor as shes got him pinned down and plunge it into her chest.

they get off the floor and come to untie me. louis stands in front of me and helps me up. " i thought you left" i say hugging him as liam and harry wrap their arms around me. "we werent going to leave you." liam says. "you got shot. i saw it" i say looking up at harry. "it jsut grazed my shoulder." he says pointing. "lets get out of here" louis says. before we can turn to walk out theres another gun shot and i see louis gasp. "louis whats wrong" i say his eyes are wide looking at me with his back to the door, he slumps to the ground and falls completely on to his stomach and i see thegun shot in his back. i look at the door but vaguely see a mans face as he turns a corner and my eyes go wide at what he looks like. i cant move im in shock of who i think i just saw. liam and harry are shaking. and fighting back tears in their eyes as i stand completely frozen to the spot. theyre trying to get my attention but nothing is coming into focus other than who i just saw take off after shooting lou. i look at liam and then at harry and down at louis and back to the door. when my voice comes back it sounds like a whisper as if i cant believe what im saying.

"dad?"

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Comments

@JustBloo.
glad you like it. i changed the whole ending. should only be a few more chapters. what you think or should i keep it going?

gibbskel gibbskel
2/2/16

Whoa!! What. Just. Happened?! Lol That was GREAT!

JustBloo. JustBloo.
2/1/16

@onedirectionsprincess6
well thank you. even i was a bit creeped out, plus if a story doesnt give you any kind of emotion how will you know if its that good. i cried to and i wrote the thing haha. thank you.

gibbskel gibbskel
11/3/15

this story is awesome! i actually cried at some point haha, it gives me all the feels, and i was reading it last night, and felt actually kind of creeped out haha :)

@gibbskel
Yay for hell breaking loose! Can't wait :)

JustBloo. JustBloo.
7/1/15