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Welcome To The Clan, Baby Girl

1. Panicked Old Bill

Liv's POV -
"Mum?!" I shouted upstairs. "What?! I'm busy on the phone! Will you be quiet for once?" "But where's my uniform?" I've had enough of these phone calls. Michael. Michael. Fucking. James. Mum's new 'Boyfriend'. I would say that he was actually, just a good friend. Mum started meeting up with Michael ever since she meet him in a bar, pretty cliché am I right? Now she think's he's her 'boyfriend'. He might be. But I don't want him to be. Its been just me and mum since dad left us. I don't want HIM to affect our relationship. "ON THE FUCKING RADIATOR!!!" mum shouted. She was pissed off. I should leave.
I got changed and went just up the street to my 1950's style diner. Well, my mum's. I work nights now since I haven't really got anything to do, except my phone, with is okay but I normally get slammed by Jamie. Jamie's my boyfriend, as soon as I say "Hi" on Facebook, he spams the living daylights out of me so I prefer to come here. I prefer the soothing sound of Elvis Presley instead of my phone chiming once every 5 seconds. Billy came through the door to the nearly empty diner, he shouldn't be out this late, its 11:15, he should be at home with his wife Jenifer. I asked "Bill? You okay? What you doing out so late?" he seems to be in a rush. "You need to go back home and be with your mum..." "What? Why?" "Let me speak Livvy, there's a gang going around looking for you, you need to keep yourself and your mum safe. Stay inside. BOTH of you." and in a click if my fingers he was gone.

Notes

Here's the first chapter of "Welcome To The Clan, Baby Girl"!! Hope you liked it and comment if you did!! This is my first story so every little comment will make such a difference. Thanks for reading, till next time.
PolaroidStyles xx

Comments

Love it update please (cliffhanger)

Andrea_Styles Andrea_Styles
9/6/15

Update!!!!

Laraib Roy. Laraib Roy.
5/25/15

@electrichearts
Olay, thank you so much for the feedback and I'll try and make an improvement in the next chapter, thanks again


PolaroidStyles .x

I really like where I can see this story going but you need to layout your chapter so its easier for people to read it. Space out your text and dialogue. You'll get a lot more interest then, trust me :)

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5/3/15