Welcome To The Clan, Baby Girl - Comments

Love it update please (cliffhanger)

Update!!!!

@electrichearts
Olay, thank you so much for the feedback and I'll try and make an improvement in the next chapter, thanks again

I really like where I can see this story going but you need to layout your chapter so its easier for people to read it. Space out your text and dialogue. You'll get a lot more interest then, trust me :)