Reviews

Here's my review for you :)

I don't think your story needs a review because I think its beautifully written. You barely have any grammar mistakes your on point with your story. When I was reading it I was doing somersaults in my bedroom. Your a very talented writer I can feel their POV'S. I feel like I'm one with the characters :) <3 Your story is going to be very successful I feel it. Everybody needs to subscribe to your story. I hope this helps you. You probably didn't need my review because your on a good track :)

Plot 10/10
Characters 10/10
Overall 11/10 :) <3

My love with the story is incredibly high.

Improving
1) NONE

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