Reviews
A Very Harry Diary
Here's my review :)
The way the book is written is very different from others. It gives off a good side from the boys POV'S. I like how its written in diary form that's a smart way of doing it :) I know its a diary and such, I feel like its lacking. Maybe you should put the boys diaries part every chapter. So the readers can feel what their going through. And you should do the girls entries to. The Ella and Harry thing is kind of aggravating to read because one part says Harry loves her then the next he hates her. But so far your doing a amazing job :)
Cover : 9/10
Summary: 10/10 I like it how it tells you what your reading :)
Plot : 7.5/10
Improving Story
1} Be more descriptive
2} Warn your readers there's going to be the boy's POV also. Maybe putting Example : Louis Diary for the chapter name and etc.
Sorry if I sounded bitchy :(
Hey there love, it would mean the world to me if you could do a review on my story call, "Contrast between you and I." Thanks heaps lovely xxx
4/30/15