It's A Good Story But..
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It's A Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious Story!! (5)
Grades :Cover : 10 - AmaZayn!
Characters: 5 - Love The Descriptions, I love Jack & Finn <33
Names: N/A- Doesn't Matter
Grammar & Mistakes : 10- Didn't see anything.
Plot: 10- I've never read a story like this! The first chapter quickly got my attention, but what really got my attention is that you didn't use a girl! Which is really shocking! I've never read a story without a main girl character.
If I enjoyed: I love this story but I didn't subscribed, I just kinda don't read this kind of story. But I did vote :)
Hey love it would mean the world to me if you could do a review on my story call "Contrast between you and me." It's only two chapters long so far :) Thanks heaps love xxx
4/30/15