It's A Good Story But..
~Deadly~
It's A Alright Story But..(3.5)
Grades :Cover : 8- I like it, but it's kinda blurry.
Characters: Iris & Quinn are Pretty, I wish you put in a little description for them though.
Names: 4- I've never heard the name Iris.
Grammar & Mistakes : 9- Try making the chapters longer.
Plot: 8- The running on the first day of kidnap is getting kinda old, and the whole 'feisty' I likey. Sorry back to the plot. I liked it, it's kinda original though. Try to spice it up a bit, as in she tries to murder somebody (Don't use that, it was just an example) or something, not she falls for a different guy or she tries to kill herself.
If I enjoyed: I've read a lot of stories like this, I love kidnapping/punk or anything with revenge stories but this story wasn't really catching my attention. But I did vote :)
Hey love it would mean the world to me if you could do a review on my story call "Contrast between you and me." It's only two chapters long so far :) Thanks heaps love xxx
4/30/15