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Mistakes

Rating: 9

Link:
http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/56866/Mistakes/2/

Spacing: spacing was great! I like how you spaced. You didn't leave a blank line you just started a new paragraph, I love that!

My opinion: You went straight into the story and you didn't give to much background information. Of course I don't really like that. But your story was different. Yes you dove straight into the plot but I wasn't confused. I felt like I knew what was happening even though you got straight to the point. This is a really good book! But I don't think I'd read it. But I encourage you to continue writing this!

Notes

Please vote no one is voting I only got one:(. Other than that most stories will be 9 because I'm not that picky