Reviews!

So the first one Fool's Gold

Rating:7

Link:
http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/61489/Fools-Gold/

Spacing: Your spacing was great. I'm not to picky about paragraphs just in my opinion I would make them longer

So far in this story I was really confused. I have no idea what's going on. I re-read a couple of times and still couldn't understand it. The first chapter was enough for me. Maybe if you made it more clear I would read it but for now I wouldn't read it.

Then Cross Country

Rating:9.2

Link:
http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/47744/Cross-Country-H-S/2/

Spacing:Your spacing was great once again

This story is amazing, I had read it before and I realy do like it. In this book if you read the prologue your story was easy to read and I never got lost as to what's happening. I say continue this! This was a great book and I will definitely read it.

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