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Your Short description is confusing, but I can't take marks off for that.
Your cover image is good. +1
Your summary is short and doesn't say enough of your story. Remember darling, a summary is a short version of your story... Maybe make it longer? -1
I'm guessing your title fits your story (by your cover image) but maybe use the quote you have in your cover image as your short description? +1
You don't have character descriptions really. Remember, a character description is something to sum up your characters for your readers. So we want to KNOW about the character. Meaning personality wise. -1
Do NOT mix past a present tense, you did that a few times. -1
Your chapter is short... -1
I can't tell if your story is unique yet, so I'm not giving points for that. And your first chapter was confusing; so try not to confuse your readers alright?
Your grammar is good. +1
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When you have more chapters up, let me re-do your review.
Have a beautiful day/night honey x -Telichia
Hi!
I was wondering if you could please do a review on my Fanfiction The Night It All Went Down?
There's a few mistakes, I know, as I write it on my iPad and sometimes it autocorrects or I hit a wrong letter- when I edit it, since I'm not the most observant person in the world, they don't always get picked up!
Thank you :)
2/14/15