Everything Fanfiction. I DON'T DO 5SOS

So I'm starting your book off with a 5 because I didn't finish reading it. I'll start with the + marks.


Your summary is good. +1
Your characters are good. +1
Your story name is good, although you asked your readers if they want Niall or Harry with Emily, and I believe that you should stick with what you had planned for the story. From reading your book's title, you planned for Emily and Harry to be tother. So stick with what you had planned in the beginning, alright? But either way, your story name is good. +1

So far you're at 8.

So for your cover image, most readers want something with either the characters or the story title in the cover image, it draws the readers. But your cover image is cute. Just think about it. -1
For your grammar, you write pretty good. Thought I've seen a few mistakes, so check your chapter before you post it. -1
Your writing style is good, but you should spend some time on the chapter before you post it. It seems like you just write and update, which is wrong because you have people who read your story, which makes it your Responsibility to satisfy readers. -1
Your story isn't so unique. There's not much differency than other stories with this story line. -1


So I'm leaving you with 4. Have a lovely day/night.
-Telichia xx

Notes