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I believe that your book has a good story line, however I don't think you spend enough time on your book. If you want it to be a sucsess, please use my advice. 1. Change your cover image or add the name of the book to it 2. You don't have a description, I think you should add one 3. Your summary is alright. +1 4 You don't spend enough time writing or planning your chapters, therefor you confuse your readers which makes them lose interest 5. Your characters are good. +1 6. CHECK YOU GRAMMAR. This should actually be on top, it's really important! Run a spell check every time before you post! 7. I'm just giving you one more point for shipping Larry. 3. Remember : you can always ask me to remove the review I did if you don't like it. -Telichia x Have a nice day/night
Hi!
I was wondering if you could please do a review on my Fanfiction The Night It All Went Down?
There's a few mistakes, I know, as I write it on my iPad and sometimes it autocorrects or I hit a wrong letter- when I edit it, since I'm not the most observant person in the world, they don't always get picked up!
Thank you :)
2/14/15