Everything Fanfiction. I DON'T DO 5SOS

Your cover image is good.
Your summary is good, it left me curious!
The prologue was cute
I really like your book! :)
One small thing though; I noticed how your main character (after Harry took her) never thought about her friends anymore.. Like her best friend and Liam. If something like happened to me I'll be thinking about my loved ones every second. And also, when Harry talked about Liam and one of his other friends going to his house, why didn't she think about Liam and if it was her Liam? Pay more attention to the little things in your story. And when Harry cuts her, you never mention the wound again, which you should. She should try to clean it, because by now I'm guessing she might have an infection there.... Like I said, think about the little things when you write, because the little things often comes back to the story.
Make your main character plan escapes because she misses Liam and her best friend. But make her think about "if I escape, will he come after me and hurt the ones I care for?". Make her think of what would happen if she stays with Harry and obeys him, or what would happen if she tried to leave, or still kept up with her attitude she has now. I'm not saying make her do those things, but if you're in that situation you'll think about that kind of things. She has to think about her situation. Always remember that your character's thoughts are what makes the story. Keep that in mind!

Other than that, your book is good.
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