Everything Fanfiction. I DON'T DO 5SOS
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I'm starting off with the things I like.. And I'm starting you off with a 5.
The idea of your story isn't that bad. +1
Your characters are good. +1
Your cover image is good, BUT maybe add something with that? +0.5
So your summary is REALLY short.. I'm not taking a point down for that, I was just thinking maybe you could write more, like write a small description of Harry and the girls.
You write about avents, not your characters too. Which you should because the readers should know your characters and how/who they are, right now, I don't kow your characters at all. -1
Pay a bit more attention to your writing :) -1
I'm not into 5SOS, so I won't be reading your story anymore, if it was about Harry or so, then I would have been a subscriber. Sorry love, I just don't like them as people in the media that much x
5.5 x
Hi!
I was wondering if you could please do a review on my Fanfiction The Night It All Went Down?
There's a few mistakes, I know, as I write it on my iPad and sometimes it autocorrects or I hit a wrong letter- when I edit it, since I'm not the most observant person in the world, they don't always get picked up!
Thank you :)
2/14/15