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Since your story only has one chapter, I'm starting you off with a 10 and not a 0.
So your cover image? I don't know if you have one on but my laptop doesn't show one? -1
I like that it's marked as a Thriller! There's not enough thrillers on this site!
Your prologue is good and well written.
Your summary is good too!
I REALLY like that you added a song to that chapter, it fits your chapter PERFECTLY.
Do I advice anyone to read your story? YES. It sounds like it has a good story line! And of course, the lovely Harry Styles is the main character. Don't you just love that boy? X
anyway, 9 x
Hi!
I was wondering if you could please do a review on my Fanfiction The Night It All Went Down?
There's a few mistakes, I know, as I write it on my iPad and sometimes it autocorrects or I hit a wrong letter- when I edit it, since I'm not the most observant person in the world, they don't always get picked up!
Thank you :)
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